Puzzles— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ như "puzzle puzzles" không đúng và câu thứ hai không đúng thì quá khứ. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và đúng ngữ pháp để trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi.

例: Yes, I used to do puzzles quite often when I was a child. However, now that I am older, I rarely do them.

提案: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và câu quá dài, nên chia câu thành các phần rõ ràng hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng liên từ phù hợp để câu mạch lạc hơn và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp như "do puzzle" thành "do puzzles".

例: I usually do puzzles when I feel bored because I don't have anything else to do. Doing puzzles helps me relax and pass the time.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, tránh dùng các cụm từ không chính xác như "I am prefer" và nên dùng liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn.

例: I prefer doing word puzzles because I am not very good at math. Number puzzles are more difficult for me since they require a lot of calculation and creative thinking.

提案: Bạn trả lời khá tốt nhưng nên chú ý đến số nhiều của danh từ (puzzle -> puzzles) và dùng từ vựng phong phú hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy dùng liên từ để câu trôi chảy hơn.

例: In my opinion, doing puzzles is beneficial for people of all ages, especially older adults, because it helps improve their memory, creativity, and cognitive skills.

× Of course, I used to puzzle puzzles a lot in my childhood.

✓ Of course, I used to do puzzles a lot in my childhood.

The verb 'puzzle' is incorrectly used as a verb here. The correct verb phrase is 'do puzzles' to indicate engaging in puzzle activities. 'Used to' requires the base form of the verb, so 'do' is appropriate.

× When I grow up, I hardly ever do puzzle.

✓ Now that I have grown up, I hardly ever do puzzles.

The phrase 'When I grow up' is incorrect for referring to the present; it should be 'Now that I have grown up' to indicate the current state. Also, 'puzzle' should be plural 'puzzles' when referring to the activity in general.

× Of course I usually do puzzle when I feel bored, since when I feel bored or feel tired I don't have anything to do, so doing the puzzle is a good choice for me to relax.

✓ Of course, I usually do puzzles when I feel bored, since when I feel bored or tired, I don't have anything to do, so doing puzzles is a good choice for me to relax.

The noun 'puzzle' should be plural 'puzzles' when referring to the activity generally. Also, 'doing the puzzle' is incorrect; it should be 'doing puzzles' to indicate the activity in general.

× Because I don't know people who hook on math very much, so I am prefer doing number puzzles and word puzzle.

✓ Because I don't know many people who are hooked on math, I prefer doing number puzzles and word puzzles.

The phrase 'I am prefer' is incorrect; 'prefer' is a stative verb and does not use 'am'. Also, 'word puzzle' should be plural 'word puzzles' to match 'number puzzles'. The sentence structure is improved by removing 'so' after 'because'.

× For me number puzzle is more difficult because I use a lot of math, sometimes use my intelligence and my creativity to solve.

✓ For me, number puzzles are more difficult because I use a lot of math, sometimes using my intelligence and creativity to solve them.

'Number puzzle' should be plural 'number puzzles' to refer generally. The verb 'use' should be consistent; 'sometimes use' is better as 'sometimes using' to maintain parallel structure. Also, 'solve' needs an object, so 'solve them' is clearer.

× In my view, I think it is good for all people to do puzzle, since when they are doing puzzle they can improve their mind, their creativity and their intelligence.

✓ In my view, I think it is good for all people to do puzzles, since when they are doing puzzles, they can improve their minds, their creativity, and their intelligence.

'Puzzle' should be plural 'puzzles' when referring to the activity generally. Also, 'mind' should be plural 'minds' to agree with 'all people'. Commas are added for clarity.