Puzzles— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to use more natural phrasing and correct grammar, such as 'It strengthened our bond and was relaxing.' Also, avoid redundancy by combining ideas more smoothly and use linking words to connect your points.

例: Yes, I really enjoyed doing puzzles as a child because they helped develop my thinking and problem-solving skills. For example, I often did puzzles with my mother, which not only strengthened our bond but was also very relaxing.

提案: Make sure to answer the question directly and use correct grammar. Instead of 'I'm boring', say 'I feel bored'. Also, explain clearly when you do puzzles and why, using linking words for coherence.

例: I usually do puzzles when I feel bored because they help me pass the time. Additionally, I find them fascinating as they improve my concentration and problem-solving skills.

提案: Use correct grammar and more natural expressions, such as 'which are hard for me' and 'word puzzles are more fun'. Also, explain your preference with clear reasons and linking words.

例: I prefer doing word puzzles because number puzzles require calculation and critical thinking skills, which I find difficult. Moreover, word puzzles are more enjoyable for me.

提案: Improve grammar and clarity by saying 'I think it's good for older people to do puzzles because they are a great way to pass the time.' Also, clarify your last sentence and use linking words to connect ideas.

例: Yes, I think it's beneficial for older people to do puzzles because they help pass the time and keep the mind active. For instance, I often do puzzles with my grandma, which provides her with company and enjoyment.

× It strengthen our bond and relaxing.

✓ It strengthens our bond and is relaxing.

The verb 'strengthen' needs to be in the third person singular present tense 'strengthens' to agree with the singular subject 'It'. Also, 'relaxing' should be preceded by 'is' to form the correct present continuous structure.

× I prefer do puzzles.

✓ I prefer to do puzzles.

The verb 'prefer' is followed by the infinitive form 'to do' rather than the bare verb 'do'. Using 'prefer to do' is the correct modal verb usage here.

× I'm boring because doing puzzles can help me kill time and it is fascinating to improve.

✓ I'm bored because doing puzzles can help me kill time and it is fascinating to improve.

The adjective 'boring' describes something that causes boredom, while 'bored' describes the feeling of the person. Here, the student means they feel bored, so 'bored' is correct.

× The word puzzle more funny.

✓ The word puzzle is more fun.

The sentence lacks the verb 'is' to link the subject and complement. Also, 'funny' means causing laughter, but 'fun' means enjoyable, which fits better here.

× I often do puzzles with my grandma by on the company.

✓ I often do puzzles with my grandma in company.

The phrase 'by on the company' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'in' when referring to doing something 'in company' meaning together with someone.