Puzzles— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りが多いです。質問に直接答え、簡潔で明確な文を使い、冗長な表現を避けましょう。例えば、"Yes, I used to do puzzles sometimes when I was a child because I enjoyed playing games."のように答えると良いです。

例: Yes, I used to do puzzles sometimes when I was a child because I enjoyed playing games.

提案: 回答が繰り返しや不明瞭な部分があり、論理的なつながりが弱いです。接続詞を使い、理由を明確に述べる練習をしましょう。例えば、"I usually do puzzles when I feel bored because it helps me focus and complete the picture."のように答えると良いです。

例: I usually do puzzles when I feel bored because it helps me focus and complete the picture.

提案: 文が断片的で繰り返しが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。理由を明確にし、簡潔に答える練習をしましょう。例えば、"I prefer word puzzles because I have disliked math since I was a child."のように答えると良いです。

例: I prefer word puzzles because I have disliked math since I was a child.

提案: 回答が不自然で繰り返しが多く、文の構造が不明瞭です。理由を簡潔に述べ、論理的に繋げる練習をしましょう。例えば、"Yes, I think puzzles are good for old people because they help keep the brain active and improve concentration."のように答えると良いです。

例: Yes, I think puzzles are good for old people because they help keep the brain active and improve concentration.

× Yes, sometimes it's possible when I was a child.

✓ Yes, sometimes I did when I was a child.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'it's possible' which is present tense and does not fit the past context. The corrected sentence uses the past tense 'did' to match the time frame 'when I was a child'.

× This is because I like to play games when I was child.

✓ This is because I liked to play games when I was a child.

The verb 'like' should be in the past tense 'liked' to agree with the past time reference 'when I was a child'. Also, 'a child' needs the article 'a'.

× So because so that I often play often play to puzzle.

✓ So, I often played puzzles.

The original sentence is repetitive and ungrammatical. Simplifying to 'So, I often played puzzles.' corrects the structure and uses past tense to match the context.

× Oh, personally I play puzzle when I when I am bored because I can when I play.

✓ Oh, personally I play puzzles when I am bored because I can focus.

The sentence is incomplete and repetitive. Correcting to 'I play puzzles when I am bored because I can focus' completes the thought and uses present tense appropriately.

× When I am playing puzzle I can focus on one thing to accomplish the pic, the art or the to complete the puzzle.

✓ When I am playing puzzles, I can focus on one thing to complete the picture or the art and finish the puzzle.

The noun 'puzzle' should be plural 'puzzles'. Also, 'accomplish the pic, the art' is unclear; 'complete the picture or the art' is clearer. The sentence uses the present participle correctly but needs clarity and plural form.

× I like to. I prefer it personally. I prefer to play word puzzle.

✓ I like to. I prefer it personally. I prefer to play word puzzles.

The noun 'puzzle' should be plural 'puzzles' when speaking generally about types of puzzles.

× This is because since I since I was a child, oh I have been, I have hated the mass so much so I don't like to see the numbers.

✓ This is because since I was a child, I have hated math so much, so I don't like to see numbers.

The phrase 'I have been, I have hated the mass' is incorrect. 'I have hated math' is the correct present perfect tense. Also, 'mass' should be 'math'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and tense.

× Yes, absolutely. This is because as I mentioned, while playing puzzle or we have to use our brain to focus on complete the puzzle and we can, we can focus on one thing and we can for, for we can, we are able to forget.

✓ Yes, absolutely. This is because, as I mentioned, while playing puzzles, we have to use our brain to focus on completing the puzzle, and we can focus on one thing and forget other things.

The phrase 'while playing puzzle or we have to use' is ungrammatical. 'While playing puzzles' is correct. Also, 'focus on complete' should be 'focus on completing' using the gerund form after 'focus on'. The sentence is clarified and corrected for grammar.