Puzzles— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语言稍显重复且句子结构不够简洁。建议避免重复表达，使用更自然流畅的句式，并且控制答案长度在五句以内。

例: Yes, I enjoyed doing puzzles as a child because they were interesting and challenging. However, now I find them time-consuming and requiring too much patience, so I don't enjoy them as much.

提案: 回答中表达不够自然，且有语法错误（如“buses require a lot of patience”应为“puzzles require a lot of patience”）。建议注意用词准确，避免语法错误，并使表达更流畅。

例: I usually don't do puzzles during trips or when I'm bored because they require a lot of patience and time. Also, I often don't have enough time to finish them while traveling, which can make me feel more bored.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“requires of patience”应为“require patience”。建议加强语法准确性，简化句子结构，使表达更清晰。

例: I don't enjoy either word or number puzzles because both require patience and specific skills. Word puzzles need a good vocabulary, while number puzzles require math knowledge, and I'm not good at either.

提案: 回答内容较好，但句子稍显冗长且重复“also”。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，避免重复表达。

例: I think puzzles are a great activity for older people because they help pass the time and improve mental skills. Additionally, doing puzzles can help them practice patience.

× And at that time I found that it is such an interesting thing to do it, but now I found it too time consuming and it requires a lot of a lot of patience and now I don't enjoy it.

✓ And at that time I found that it was such an interesting thing to do, but now I find it too time consuming and it requires a lot of patience and now I don't enjoy it.

句子中描述过去的感受时，应使用过去时态"was"，而描述现在的感受应使用现在时态"find"。此外，"a lot of a lot of patience"重复，应简化为"a lot of patience"。

× And at that time I found that it is such an interesting thing to do it, but now I found it too time consuming and it requires a lot of a lot of patience and now I don't enjoy it.

✓ And at that time I found that it was such an interesting thing to do, but now I find it too time consuming and it requires a lot of patience and now I don't enjoy it.

句中"to do it"中的"it"多余，"to do"已经表达完整，去掉"it"更符合英语习惯。

× Neither during trips nor when I feel bored. As I mentioned before, buses require a lot of patience and can be quite time consuming.

✓ Neither during trips nor when I feel bored. As I mentioned before, puzzles require a lot of patience and can be quite time consuming.

句中"buses"应为"puzzles"，原文可能是笔误，需根据上下文修正。

× During trips I usually don't have enough time to complete them and doing puzzles might even make me feel more boring.

✓ During trips I usually don't have enough time to complete them and doing puzzles might even make me feel more bored.

"boring"是形容事物使人感到无聊，"bored"是形容人的感受，句中应使用"bored"来表达自己感到无聊。

× Well, neither of them, because both of them requires of patience and skills.

✓ Well, neither of them, because both of them require patience and skills.

"both"为复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式"require"，且"requires of patience"中"of"多余，应去掉。

× Well, neither of them, because both of them requires of patience and skills.

✓ Well, neither of them, because both of them require patience and skills.

"requires of patience"中的"of"是不必要的，正确用法是"require patience"。

× And like what puzzles requires your vocabulary and number puzzles requires your mathematical knowledge and I'm not good at any of them.

✓ And like word puzzles require your vocabulary and number puzzles require your mathematical knowledge and I'm not good at either of them.

"like what puzzles"表达不清，应改为"like word puzzles"。"any of them"用于否定句时通常用"either of them"更合适。

× And like what puzzles requires your vocabulary and number puzzles requires your mathematical knowledge and I'm not good at any of them.

✓ And like word puzzles require your vocabulary and number puzzles require your mathematical knowledge and I'm not good at either of them.

"puzzles"为复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式"require"。

× Well, I think it is a great choice for old people to do puzzles because it is a good way for them to kill time and also by doing puzzles the elder can improve their mental skills and also practice their patience.

✓ Well, I think it is a great choice for old people to do puzzles because it is a good way for them to kill time and also by doing puzzles the elderly can improve their mental skills and also practice their patience.

"the elder"应为"the elderly"，表示老年人，"elder"通常用作比较级形容词。