Puzzles— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Did you do puzzles in your childhood?
受験者
No, not really because I think puzzles need intelligence and patience. Choosing 2 things I didn't have done and don't I don't have now so I don't do that. I prefer to did something simple like watching cartoons or taking a snap.
試験官
When do you do puzzles, during your trip or when you feel bored?
受験者
I only do pedals when I'm bored and, uh, have no Wi-Fi. Uh, for example when I during my flying time or training time.
試験官
Do you like doing word puzzles or number puzzles? Which is more difficult for you?
受験者
Well, neither of them. I think both of them are difficult for me because I have know enough intelligence and enough patience.
試験官
Do you think it is good for old people to do puzzles?
受験者
Yes, I think it's a good way for older people to keep their brain active and may slow down their memory loss. And by the way, it's a good way instead of watching TV all the day.
評価
総合
Part 1
Did you do puzzles in your childhood?
スコア: 50.0提案: 回答不够自然且有语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用正确时态，并直接回答问题。
例: No, I didn't do puzzles in my childhood because I thought they required too much patience and intelligence. Instead, I preferred watching cartoons or taking photos.
When do you do puzzles, during your trip or when you feel bored?
スコア: 55.0提案: 回答中有语法错误和发音不清，表达不够连贯。建议使用连词连接句子，避免重复填充词，明确表达时间和场合。
例: I usually do puzzles when I feel bored and have no Wi-Fi, such as during flights or training sessions.
Do you like doing word puzzles or number puzzles? Which is more difficult for you?
スコア: 45.0提案: 回答中有语法错误，表达不自然。建议直接回答问题，使用正确的语法，并简洁表达观点。
例: I don't like either word or number puzzles because I don't have enough patience or intelligence for them.
Do you think it is good for old people to do puzzles?
スコア: 70.0提案: 回答较好，但可以使用更多连接词使表达更流畅，避免口语化表达。建议丰富细节，使用更正式的表达。
例: Yes, I believe puzzles are beneficial for older people because they help keep the brain active and may slow memory loss. Moreover, puzzles are a better alternative to watching TV all day.
文法
× Choosing 2 things I didn't have done and don't I don't have now so I don't do that.
✓ Choosing 2 things I hadn't done and don't have now, so I don't do that.
这里使用过去完成时态'hadn't done'更符合语境，表示在过去某个时间之前未完成的动作。原句中'didn't have done'结构不正确。
× I prefer to did something simple like watching cartoons or taking a snap.
✓ I prefer to do something simple like watching cartoons or taking a nap.
'prefer to'后面应接动词原形，不能用过去式'did'。另外，'taking a snap'应为'taking a nap'，表示小睡。
× I only do pedals when I'm bored and, uh, have no Wi-Fi.
✓ I only do puzzles when I'm bored and, uh, have no Wi-Fi.
单词'pedals'应为'puzzles'，原句中拼写错误导致语义不明。
× Uh, for example when I during my flying time or training time.
✓ Uh, for example, during my flying time or training time.
句子结构混乱，'when I during'不符合语法，应去掉'when I'，使句子通顺。
× Well, neither of them. I think both of them are difficult for me because I have know enough intelligence and enough patience.
✓ Well, neither of them. I think both of them are difficult for me because I don't have enough intelligence and enough patience.
'I have know'结构错误，应为'I don't have'表示否定。
× And by the way, it's a good way instead of watching TV all the day.
✓ And by the way, it's a good way instead of watching TV all day.
'all the day'应为'all day'，表示整天，去掉定冠词'the'。
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