Puzzles— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete, especially the last sentence which ends abruptly. Try to complete your thoughts fully and avoid grammatical errors such as 'Then puzzles was' which should be 'Puzzles were'. Also, keep your answer concise and avoid redundancy by combining similar ideas.

例: Yes, I often did puzzles as a child, usually with my friends or family. Puzzles were relaxing and helped me feel calm after a busy day. They also provided a fun way to spend quality time together.

提案: Your answer is generally clear but contains a vocabulary mistake: 'sobbing' should be 'solving'. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and avoid repeating similar phrases like 'calm my mind' and 'feel refreshed' in the same answer.

例: I usually do puzzles when I feel bored or stressed because they are both fun and relaxing. For example, I enjoy solving jigsaw puzzles or brain teasers with my family and friends, which helps me unwind after a busy day.

提案: Your answer has some grammatical errors and unclear phrases, such as 'white puzzles' which likely means 'word puzzles'. Also, the sentence is too long and confusing. Try to use clear comparisons and concise sentences with appropriate linking words.

例: I enjoy both word and number puzzles, but I find number puzzles more difficult because locating the right numbers can be challenging. However, they help improve critical thinking skills, which I appreciate.

提案: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical mistakes such as 'it's actually release them' which should be 'it actually relieves them'. Also, try to provide more specific reasons or examples to support your opinion and use linking words for coherence.

例: Absolutely, I believe puzzles are beneficial for older people because they help relieve boredom and keep the mind active. Moreover, doing puzzles can make them feel calm and refreshed after a hectic day.

× Then puzzles was very relaxing and helped me feel calm and refreshed after a busy day.

✓ Then puzzles were very relaxing and helped me feel calm and refreshed after a busy day.

The subject 'puzzles' is plural, so the verb should be 'were' instead of 'was' to agree in number.

× Not only did it provide a fun way to spend time together, but they also enhanced.

✓ Not only did they provide a fun way to spend time together, but they also enhanced our skills.

The pronoun 'it' does not agree with the plural subject 'puzzles'. It should be 'they'. Also, the sentence was incomplete; adding 'our skills' clarifies the meaning.

× Sometimes I enjoy sobbing, jigsaw or brain teasers with my family and friends.

✓ Sometimes I enjoy solving jigsaw puzzles or brain teasers with my family and friends.

The word 'sobbing' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'solving'. Also, 'jigsaw' should be 'jigsaw puzzles' for clarity.

× Personally I enjoy both, but I think number puzzles is more difficult than white puzzles because finding the numbers can actually be a bit challenging, which usually takes the whole time for you to do that even though it's difficult, but it enhances critical thinking skills.

✓ Personally, I enjoy both, but I think number puzzles are more difficult than word puzzles because finding the numbers can actually be a bit challenging, which usually takes the whole time to complete, even though it's difficult, it enhances critical thinking skills.

'Number puzzles' is plural, so the verb should be 'are'. Also, 'white puzzles' seems to be a typo and should be 'word puzzles'. The sentence was long and confusing, so it was rephrased for clarity.

× Absolutely, I think it's good for all people to do puzzles because it's actually release them of boredom and also it will help them feel calm or refreshed after a hectic or a boring day.

✓ Absolutely, I think it's good for all people to do puzzles because it actually relieves them of boredom and also helps them feel calm and refreshed after a hectic or boring day.

The phrase 'it's actually release them' is incorrect; it should be 'it actually relieves them'. Also, 'will help' is changed to 'helps' to maintain present tense consistency.