Puzzles— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，存在单复数错误和冗余表达。建议简化句子结构，注意名词单复数一致，并避免重复。

例: Yes, I used to do puzzles when I was a child, especially those featuring beautiful cartoon characters like Snow White.

提案: 回答中存在拼写错误和语法错误，句子不完整，表达不清晰。建议注意拼写，使用完整句子，并用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: I often do puzzles when I feel bored because they help me pass the time and improve my problem-solving skills. However, I don't usually do them during trips because it's not very convenient.

提案: 回答中有发音或拼写错误（puzzles写成pillows），语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议注意单词拼写，使用正确的语法，并具体说明原因。

例: I like both word puzzles and number puzzles because they each have their own benefits. However, I find word puzzles more difficult because there are many possible words to consider.

提案: 回答中用词不当（depend应为do），语法错误，表达不够准确。建议使用正确词汇，注意语法，并具体说明益处。

例: Yes, I think it's very good for elderly people to do puzzles because this activity helps keep their brains active and may help prevent dementia.

× I especially liked those puzzles which had a beautiful cartoon characters on it, like Snow White on it.

✓ I especially liked those puzzles which had a beautiful cartoon character on them, like Snow White.

这里的“characters”应为单数“character”，因为指的是单个卡通形象；同时“on it”应改为“on them”，因为指的是复数“puzzles”。

× I often do pedals when I feel bored because it not only help me to pass the time but also help improve my problems with skills and I think it's not convenient for me to do it during my trip because.

✓ I often do puzzles when I feel bored because it not only helps me to pass the time but also helps improve my problem-solving skills, and I think it's not convenient for me to do it during my trip.

“pedals”应为“puzzles”；“help”应加-s变为“helps”，因为主语是单数“it”；“problems with skills”表达不准确，应改为“problem-solving skills”。

× I like both 2 pillows and they have their own benefits and I think the word puzzles is more difficult for me because there are many possible word for them.

✓ I like both types of puzzles and they have their own benefits, and I think the word puzzles are more difficult for me because there are many possible words for them.

“2 pillows”应为“types of puzzles”；“word puzzles is”应改为“word puzzles are”，主谓一致；“possible word”应为复数“possible words”。

× Yes, I think it's really good for the elderly to depend those because this activity can help their brains keep active and also provide them from dementia.

✓ Yes, I think it's really good for the elderly to do those because this activity can help keep their brains active and also protect them from dementia.

“depend those”用词错误，应为“do those”；“help their brains keep active”应改为“help keep their brains active”；“provide them from dementia”应改为“protect them from dementia”。