Puzzles— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“do puddles”应为“doing puzzles”，且句子结构不够清晰。建议注意时态一致性和正确使用动词形式，同时避免重复表达。

例: Yes, I often did puzzles with my close friends, classmates, or my parents when I was a child because doing puzzles exercises the mind and sparks creativity. I found it really fascinating.

提案: 回答中存在拼写错误（paddles应为 puzzles），句子结构混乱，表达不够连贯。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并注意时态和语法的正确性。

例: I usually do puzzles during trips because they help me relax and pass the time. When I feel bored at home, I prefer to scroll through my phone and watch videos. Also, doing puzzles on trips can strengthen my relationships with friends.

提案: 回答中有拼写错误（award puzzle应为 word puzzle），语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议加强词汇准确性和句子完整性，明确表达观点。

例: I prefer word puzzles because I enjoy studying the Chinese language and culture. Number puzzles are more difficult for me since I'm not very good at math and numbers.

提案: 回答中表达有些混乱，语法和用词不准确。建议简化句子结构，使用恰当的连接词，并提供具体例子支持观点。

例: Yes, I believe puzzles are very beneficial for older people because they help keep the mind active and can delay cognitive decline. For example, I have read research showing that puzzles improve memory and concentration.

× Yes, I always do puzzles with my close friend, classmates or my parents when I was a kid because do puddles can exercise our mind to create some inspirations.

✓ Yes, I always did puzzles with my close friends, classmates, or my parents when I was a kid because doing puzzles can exercise our minds to create some inspirations.

句子中描述的是过去的习惯动作，应该使用过去时态“did”而不是现在时态“do”。另外，“do puddles”应为“doing puzzles”，因为动词后接动名词表示动作。mind应为复数形式minds，因为指多个人的头脑。

× Yes, I always do puzzles with my close friend, classmates or my parents when I was a kid because do puddles can exercise our mind to create some inspirations.

✓ Yes, I always did puzzles with my close friends, classmates, or my parents when I was a kid because doing puzzles can exercise our minds to create some inspirations.

“friend”应为复数形式“friends”，因为后面列举了多个对象。mind应为复数形式“minds”，因为指多个人的头脑。

× Yes, I always do puzzles with my close friend, classmates or my parents when I was a kid because do puddles can exercise our mind to create some inspirations.

✓ Yes, I always did puzzles with my close friends, classmates, or my parents when I was a kid because doing puzzles can exercise our minds to create some inspirations.

动词“do”后面接动名词“doing”表示动作的进行或习惯，不能直接用动词原形。

× It also really be fascinated for me.

✓ It was also really fascinating for me.

描述过去的感受，应该用过去时态“was”，并且“fascinated”是过去分词，形容词应为“fascinating”。

× I usually do paddles during my trip because when I was too bored I just want to relax my mind so I'll choose to scrolling my phone to watch some videos on social media and for trip I think it can bound the relationship with friends.

✓ I usually do puzzles during my trips because when I am too bored I just want to relax my mind, so I choose to scroll my phone to watch some videos on social media. For trips, I think it can bond the relationship with friends.

“paddles”应为“puzzles”。“when I was too bored”应为现在时“when I am too bored”，因为描述习惯。动词“choose”后接动词原形“scroll”，而不是动名词“scrolling”。“bound”应为“bond”，表示建立关系。

× I usually do paddles during my trip because when I was too bored I just want to relax my mind so I'll choose to scrolling my phone to watch some videos on social media and for trip I think it can bound the relationship with friends.

✓ I usually do puzzles during my trips because when I am too bored I just want to relax my mind, so I choose to scroll my phone to watch some videos on social media. For trips, I think it can bond the relationship with friends.

“trip”应为复数“trips”，因为指多次旅行。

× I usually do paddles during my trip because when I was too bored I just want to relax my mind so I'll choose to scrolling my phone to watch some videos on social media and for trip I think it can bound the relationship with friends.

✓ I usually do puzzles during my trips because when I am too bored I just want to relax my mind, so I choose to scroll my phone to watch some videos on social media. For trips, I think it can bond the relationship with friends.

动词“choose”后面应接动词原形“scroll”，而不是动名词“scrolling”。

× I usually do paddles during my trip because when I was too bored I just want to relax my mind so I'll choose to scrolling my phone to watch some videos on social media and for trip I think it can bound the relationship with friends.

✓ I usually do puzzles during my trips because when I am too bored I just want to relax my mind, so I choose to scroll my phone to watch some videos on social media. For trips, I think it can bond the relationship with friends.

“for trip”应为“for trips”，且表达应为“bond the relationship”，不需要介词“for”。

× I prefer to award puzzle because I'm keen on studying the Chinese language and the culture, and I think number puzzles is really difficult for me because I'm not sensitive for the member and the mathematics is quite.

✓ I prefer word puzzles because I'm keen on studying the Chinese language and culture, and I think number puzzles are really difficult for me because I'm not sensitive to numbers and mathematics is quite hard.

“award puzzle”应为“word puzzles”。“number puzzles is”应为“number puzzles are”，主谓一致。

× I prefer to award puzzle because I'm keen on studying the Chinese language and the culture, and I think number puzzles is really difficult for me because I'm not sensitive for the member and the mathematics is quite.

✓ I prefer word puzzles because I'm keen on studying the Chinese language and culture, and I think number puzzles are really difficult for me because I'm not sensitive to numbers and mathematics is quite hard.

“sensitive for”应为“sensitive to”，表示对某事敏感。

× I prefer to award puzzle because I'm keen on studying the Chinese language and the culture, and I think number puzzles is really difficult for me because I'm not sensitive for the member and the mathematics is quite.

✓ I prefer word puzzles because I'm keen on studying the Chinese language and culture, and I think number puzzles are really difficult for me because I'm not sensitive to numbers and mathematics is quite hard.

句子末尾“the mathematics is quite”结构不完整，缺少形容词，补充“hard”使句子完整。

× Yes, I believe it's very beneficial for other people to discover engaging in puzzles helps keep their minds active and sure, which can delay the mind decline.

✓ Yes, I believe it's very beneficial for older people to discover that engaging in puzzles helps keep their minds active and sure, which can delay mental decline.

“other people”应为“older people”，符合上下文。

× Yes, I believe it's very beneficial for other people to discover engaging in puzzles helps keep their minds active and sure, which can delay the mind decline.

✓ Yes, I believe it's very beneficial for older people to discover that engaging in puzzles helps keep their minds active and alert, which can delay mental decline.

句子缺少连接词“that”，使句子结构完整。

× Yes, I believe it's very beneficial for other people to discover engaging in puzzles helps keep their minds active and sure, which can delay the mind decline.

✓ Yes, I believe it's very beneficial for older people to discover that engaging in puzzles helps keep their minds active and alert, which can delay mental decline.

“sure”用作形容词不合适，应改为“alert”，表示头脑清醒。

× For example, I read many research to show that the puzzles improve their memory and concentration.

✓ For example, I have read many research studies that show puzzles improve memory and concentration.

“read”应使用现在完成时“have read”，表示过去到现在的经历。

× For example, I read many research to show that the puzzles improve their memory and concentration.

✓ For example, I have read many research studies that show puzzles improve memory and concentration.

“research”是不可数名词，前面应加复数名词“studies”来表示多项研究。