Puzzles— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法有些错误，表达不够简洁自然。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用更地道的表达方式。

例: Yes, I used to do puzzles in primary school. Our teacher would give us pictures and ask us to figure out which pieces belonged to them.

提案: 回答内容较丰富，但句子连接不够流畅，部分表达重复。建议使用连接词使表达更连贯，同时避免重复。

例: Recently, I play a video game called Blueprints that involves solving puzzles. I find it really fun because I have to figure out each puzzle to advance to the next level, which keeps me engaged and entertained.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，句子结构较为混乱。建议理清思路，使用更准确的语法和连贯的句子表达观点。

例: I prefer word puzzles because I'm not good at numbers. Whether in math exams or puzzles, numbers are difficult for me since I can't calculate quickly or accurately, which often troubles me during tests.

提案: 回答中有重复词汇和表达不够简洁的问题。建议避免重复，使用更自然的表达，并且补充具体的益处说明。

例: Yes, I believe puzzles are beneficial for older people, especially retirees, as they have plenty of free time. Puzzles can be time-consuming and involve tasks like spelling and calculating, which help keep the mind active.

× let us to figure out which part belonged to these pictures.

✓ let us figure out which part belonged to these pictures.

动词 let 后面直接跟动词原形，不加 to。这里的错误是多加了 to，正确用法是 let us figure out。

× Recently I do puzzles in the video game called Blueprints.

✓ Recently I have been doing puzzles in the video game called Blueprints.

表示最近一段时间持续发生的动作，应该用现在完成进行时，不能用一般现在时。

× It's really fun that I have to figure out the puzzles and to get into the next stage.

✓ It's really fun that I have to figure out the puzzles and get into the next stage.

并列动词中，第二个动词不需要加 to，保持与第一个动词一致。

× I'm not really not good at numbers.

✓ I'm really not good at numbers.

双重否定在这里不合适，导致意思混乱，应去掉一个 not，使句子表达清晰。

× No matter in the math exam or in the puzzles.

✓ No matter in the math exam or in the puzzles,

此句为不完整句，应与后文连贯，建议合并或补充完整。

× It's the numbers are just quite difficult for me.

✓ Numbers are just quite difficult for me.

句子中多余的主语 it，导致结构混乱，应去掉 it。

× I can't calculate very accurate and fast.

✓ I can't calculate very accurately and quickly.

形容词用来修饰名词，副词用来修饰动词，这里修饰动词 calculate 应用副词 accurately 和 quickly。

× So it's really disturbed me when I took the exams.

✓ So it really disturbed me when I took the exams.

主语 it 与动词 disturbed 不匹配，去掉 is，改为 it disturbed。

× Yes, I think it's a good activity for the old people, especially for the retired people who have a lot of spare time to spend because the puzzles are quite time time consuming and they engage multiple tasks like spelling and calculating, which is good.

✓ Yes, I think it's a good activity for old people, especially for retired people who have a lot of spare time to spend because puzzles are quite time-consuming and they engage multiple tasks like spelling and calculating, which is good.

old people 和 retired people 前不需要加定冠词 the；puzzles 前不需要加定冠词 the；time-consuming 需要连字符连接。