Puzzles— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中表达不够自然，句子结构复杂且有语法错误，建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并且更直接回答问题。

例: Yes, I enjoyed playing Weiqi, also known as Go, during my childhood. Although many consider it a sport, I think of it as a puzzle because it requires a lot of strategic thinking and knowledge.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，建议使用更准确的词汇和简洁的句子，避免重复，并用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: I do puzzles both when I travel and when I feel bored. They help me pass the time and keep my mind active, which I find enjoyable and stimulating.

提案: 回答内容不够具体且有语法错误，建议明确表达喜欢的类型并说明原因，避免不相关的信息，使用恰当的词汇。

例: I prefer number puzzles, especially Sudoku, because they challenge my logical thinking. Since I majored in IT, I enjoy puzzles that help me improve my math and problem-solving skills.

提案: 回答表达不清且含糊，建议明确说明益处，避免模糊和不连贯的表达，使用具体理由支持观点。

例: Yes, I believe puzzles are beneficial for older people because they help keep the mind sharp and prevent memory decline.

× Well, in my childhood I did learn weiqi or say go as my hobby.

✓ Well, in my childhood I learned weiqi or go as my hobby.

这里使用了'did learn'，在一般过去时中，助动词'did'后面应使用动词原形，直接用'learned'即可。建议直接使用过去式'learned'，更符合英语表达习惯。

× Although we often say that it is a kind of sports, but I like to think it's tend to a puzzle because it needs lots of knowledge and it is difficult to try it.

✓ Although we often say that it is a kind of sport, I like to think it tends to be a puzzle because it needs lots of knowledge and it is difficult to try.

句中同时使用了'Although'和'but'，这是重复连接词，应去掉'but'。另外，'sports'应为不可数名词'sport'，'it's tend'应改为'it tends'，并且缺少不定式'to be'。建议去掉'but'，改正名词单复数和动词形式。

× Although we often say that it is a kind of sports, but I like to think it's tend to a puzzle because it needs lots of knowledge and it is difficult to try it.

✓ Although we often say that it is a kind of sport, I like to think it tends to be a puzzle because it needs lots of knowledge and it is difficult to try.

这里'sports'应为不可数名词'sport'，表示一种运动。

× Although we often say that it is a kind of sports, but I like to think it's tend to a puzzle because it needs lots of knowledge and it is difficult to try it.

✓ Although we often say that it is a kind of sport, I like to think it tends to be a puzzle because it needs lots of knowledge and it is difficult to try.

主语是第三人称单数'it'，谓语动词应加-s，'tend'应改为'tends'。

× Well, I think it's both because I think puzzles is a kind of stuff that can help me to kill times, making my brain working instead of rested, and it can stimulate myself to learn more about the knowledge of it.

✓ Well, I think it's both because I think puzzles are a kind of stuff that can help me kill time, keep my brain working instead of resting, and it can stimulate me to learn more about its knowledge.

puzzles是复数，谓语动词应为are；'kill times'应为'kill time'；'making my brain working'应为'keep my brain working'；'rested'应为'resting'；'stimulate myself'应为'stimulate me'。

× Well, I think it's both because I think puzzles is a kind of stuff that can help me to kill times, making my brain working instead of rested, and it can stimulate myself to learn more about the knowledge of it.

✓ Well, I think it's both because I think puzzles are a kind of stuff that can help me kill time, keep my brain working instead of resting, and it can stimulate me to learn more about its knowledge.

'myself'用法错误，应该用宾格'me'。

× Well, I think it's both because I think puzzles is a kind of stuff that can help me to kill times, making my brain working instead of rested, and it can stimulate myself to learn more about the knowledge of it.

✓ Well, I think it's both because I think puzzles are a kind of stuff that can help me kill time, keep my brain working instead of resting, and it can stimulate me to learn more about its knowledge.

'making my brain working'结构不正确，应改为'keep my brain working'；'rested'应改为动名词'resting'。

× Well most of the times I like to to numbers puzzles, especially sudoku because it needs lots of skills about maps and I was a major in IT so I need lots of technique to improve my skills and mathematics and arithmetics.

✓ Well, most of the time I like to do number puzzles, especially sudoku because it needs lots of skills about maps and I majored in IT so I need lots of techniques to improve my skills in mathematics and arithmetic.

'most of the times'应为'most of the time'；'to to numbers puzzles'应为'to do number puzzles'；'technique'应为复数'techniques'；'arithmetics'通常用'arithmetic'。

× Well most of the times I like to to numbers puzzles, especially sudoku because it needs lots of skills about maps and I was a major in IT so I need lots of technique to improve my skills and mathematics and arithmetics.

✓ Well, most of the time I like to do number puzzles, especially sudoku because it needs lots of skills about maps and I majored in IT so I need lots of techniques to improve my skills in mathematics and arithmetic.

'I was a major in IT'表达不正确，应该用'I majored in IT'表示过去主修。

× Well most of the times I like to to numbers puzzles, especially sudoku because it needs lots of skills about maps and I was a major in IT so I need lots of technique to improve my skills and mathematics and arithmetics.

✓ Well, most of the time I like to do number puzzles, especially sudoku because it needs lots of skills about maps and I majored in IT so I need lots of techniques to improve my skills in mathematics and arithmetic.

'skills about maps'表达不自然，建议用'skills in maps'或更具体的表达。

× Well most of the times I like to to numbers puzzles, especially sudoku because it needs lots of skills about maps and I was a major in IT so I need lots of technique to improve my skills and mathematics and arithmetics.

✓ Well, most of the time I like to do number puzzles, especially sudoku because it needs lots of skills related to maps and I majored in IT so I need lots of techniques to improve my skills in mathematics and arithmetic.

'skills about maps'不太准确，建议用'related to maps'或'in maps'。

× Well, I think it is good for old people to do puzzles because it can help them to postpone them being old or stick to a conventional ideas or points in the past.

✓ Well, I think it is good for old people to do puzzles because it can help them postpone getting old or sticking to conventional ideas or points from the past.

'postpone them being old'结构不正确，应该用' postpone getting old'；'stick to a conventional ideas'中冠词和名词数不匹配，应去掉'a'或改为复数；'in the past'更自然表达为'from the past'。