Puzzles— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to use plural form 'puzzles' consistently and avoid repetition of the word 'puzzle'. Also, make your answer more natural by adding a linking phrase and varying sentence structure.

例: Yes, I used to do puzzles in my childhood because they were very interesting games. I enjoyed solving them during my spare time as they kept me engaged and entertained.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Please clarify when you do puzzles and use linking words to connect ideas logically. Also, keep the answer concise and relevant.

例: I usually do puzzles when I feel bored because they help me relax my mind. Additionally, solving puzzles in the morning gives me a good start to the day.

提案: Use plural forms 'word puzzles' and 'number puzzles'. Improve sentence structure and use linking words to connect your ideas clearly. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'grab many words'.

例: I prefer doing word puzzles because they help me improve my vocabulary and spelling, which is useful for my studies. On the other hand, number puzzles are more difficult for me.

提案: Make your answer more natural by using appropriate expressions like 'keep the mind active' and 'improve cognitive abilities'. Also, avoid awkward phrases such as 'make good mind'.

例: Yes, definitely. Doing puzzles is beneficial for older people because it helps keep their minds active and improves their cognitive abilities.

× Yes, I did puzzle in my childhood because puzzle was very interesting game and I like to do puzzle in my spare time.

✓ Yes, I did puzzles in my childhood because puzzles were very interesting games and I like to do puzzles in my spare time.

The word 'puzzle' should be plural 'puzzles' because it refers to multiple instances. Also, 'puzzle was very interesting game' should be 'puzzles were very interesting games' to match plural subject with plural verb and noun. This correction ensures subject-verb agreement and correct plural usage.

× Yes, I did puzzle in my childhood because puzzle was very interesting game and I like to do puzzle in my spare time.

✓ Yes, I did puzzles in my childhood because puzzles were very interesting games and I liked to do puzzles in my spare time.

The phrase 'I like to do puzzle in my spare time' refers to past habit related to childhood, so 'like' should be in past tense 'liked' to maintain tense consistency.

× When do you do puzzles, during your trip or when you feel bored?

✓ When do you do puzzles, on your trip or when you feel bored?

The correct preposition to use with 'trip' is 'on' not 'during' when asking about an activity happening in that time frame.

× When I feel more than I prefer to do puzzles because it relaxed my mind and provided me a good start of my day.

✓ When I feel bored, I prefer to do puzzles because they relax my mind and provide me a good start to my day.

The original sentence is unclear and incomplete ('When I feel more than'). It should specify the feeling, e.g., 'bored'. Also, verb tenses should be present to match habitual action: 'relaxed' to 'relax' and 'provided' to 'provide'. 'A good start of my day' should be 'a good start to my day' for correct preposition usage.

× I would like to do word puzzle because word puzzle is a helpful for me in my study.

✓ I would like to do word puzzles because word puzzles are helpful for me in my study.

'Word puzzle' should be plural 'word puzzles' to indicate the general activity. Also, 'is a helpful' is incorrect; 'are helpful' matches plural subject and correct adjective usage.

× I would like to do word puzzle because word puzzle is a helpful for me in my study.

✓ I would like to do word puzzles because word puzzles are helpful for me in my study.

The article 'a' before 'helpful' is incorrect because 'helpful' is an adjective, not a noun. Remove 'a' and use plural verb 'are' to agree with plural subject.

× I can grab many words with spelling which is helpful for me in future and number puzzle is very difficult for me.

✓ I can learn many words with correct spelling, which is helpful for me in the future, and number puzzles are very difficult for me.

'Grab many words with spelling' is awkward; 'learn many words with correct spelling' is clearer. 'In future' should be 'in the future' with article. 'Number puzzle' should be plural 'number puzzles' and verb 'is' changed to 'are' to agree with plural subject.

× Yes, definitely it is good for old people to do puzzles because puzzles make good mind of old people and increase the thinking of individual.

✓ Yes, definitely it is good for old people to do puzzles because puzzles make the minds of old people better and increase individual thinking.

'Puzzles make good mind' is incorrect; it should be 'make the minds better' to express improvement. 'Increase the thinking of individual' is awkward; 'increase individual thinking' is clearer and grammatically correct.