Puzzles— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cavabınızda daha təbii və aydın ifadələr istifadə edin. Cümlələrinizdə qrammatik səhvləri düzəldin və fikirlərinizi daha səlis şəkildə ifadə edin. Məsələn, 'I really loved making puzzles with the help of my mom and granddad' kimi ifadələr daha düzgün olar.

例: Yes, I did puzzles in my childhood because my grandma always bought them for me. I really enjoyed making puzzles with the help of my mom and granddad, which made the experience even more fun.

提案: Cümlələrinizi daha qısa və aydın edin, lazımsız sözləri çıxarın və fikirlərinizi daha səlis ifadə edin. Məsələn, 'I prefer doing puzzles at home when I feel bored because I don't like doing them outside or during trips' kimi ifadələr daha təbii səslənir.

例: I usually do puzzles at home when I feel bored because I don't enjoy doing them during trips or outside. I find it more relaxing to do puzzles in a comfortable environment.

提案: Cümlələrinizi daha aydın və qrammatik cəhətdən düzgün qurun. Fikirlərinizi daha dəqiq ifadə edin və qarışıqlıq yaratmayın. Məsələn, 'I have never done number puzzles, but I find word puzzles interesting and prefer them' kimi ifadələr daha yaxşıdır.

例: I have never done number puzzles in my life. I find word puzzles more interesting, so I prefer them over other types of puzzles.

提案: Cümlələrinizi daha düzgün və aydın qurun. Fikirlərinizi daha səlis ifadə edin və əlaqələndirici sözlərdən istifadə edin. Məsələn, 'I believe puzzles are beneficial for everyone, especially older people, because they help keep the mind active. However, some elderly people may have vision problems that make it difficult.'

例: I believe puzzles are beneficial for everyone, especially older people, because they help keep the mind active. However, some elderly people may have vision problems that make it difficult to do puzzles.

× I really loved making puzzles with helping my mom, my granddad.

✓ I really loved making puzzles with the help of my mom and my granddad.

The phrase 'with helping' is incorrect. The correct form is 'with the help of' to express assistance. Using 'helping' as a gerund here is ungrammatical.

× That's why when I do it, I really enjoyed from puzzles.

✓ That's why when I do it, I really enjoy puzzles.

The sentence mixes present tense 'do' with past tense 'enjoyed' and uses 'enjoyed from' which is incorrect. The correct form is present tense 'enjoy' without 'from'.

× Actually, when I do puzzles during my trip, I don't like it because uh, it's not interesting for me during uh trip.

✓ Actually, when I do puzzles during my trip, I don't like it because it's not interesting for me during the trip.

The phrase 'during uh trip' lacks the definite article 'the'. Also, 'uh' is a filler and should be omitted in formal correction.

× I just love doing at home.

✓ I just love doing them at home.

The verb 'doing' requires an object here. Adding 'them' clarifies the object (puzzles). Also, 'at home' is correct preposition usage.

× Actually, I didn't do number puzzles, uh, during my childhood or during my own life.

✓ Actually, I haven't done number puzzles during my childhood or in my life.

The present perfect tense 'haven't done' is more appropriate to express experience up to now. 'During my own life' is awkward; 'in my life' is better.

× I just used to think word puzzle and it is interesting for me.

✓ I just used to think about word puzzles and they are interesting to me.

The verb 'think' requires the preposition 'about' when referring to a topic. Also, 'word puzzle' should be plural 'word puzzles' to match context.

× That's why I prefer word puzzles rather than normal puzzles.

✓ That's why I prefer word puzzles rather than number puzzles.

The comparison is between word puzzles and number puzzles, not 'normal puzzles'. The original sentence is unclear.

× I think that the word puzzle is both.

✓ I think that word puzzles are both interesting and challenging.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'Word puzzle' should be plural 'word puzzles' and the sentence should specify what 'both' refers to.

× because when they people become old, their mind doesn't work well.

✓ because when people become old, their minds don't work well.

'They people' is incorrect; 'people' alone is correct. 'Mind' should be plural 'minds' to agree with plural subject 'people'. Also, verb 'doesn't' should be 'don't' for plural subject.

× sometimes old people doesn't see very good.

✓ sometimes old people don't see very well.

The subject 'old people' is plural, so the verb should be 'don't' not 'doesn't'. Also, 'see very good' is incorrect; the adverb 'well' should be used instead of the adjective 'good'.