Puzzles— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer more structured and clear. Start with a direct response, then add specific details using linking words. Avoid repetition and grammatical errors. For example, use 'I used to enjoy solving puzzles in my childhood because they helped improve my memory and knowledge, especially word puzzles.'

例: Yes, I used to enjoy solving puzzles in my childhood because they helped improve my memory and knowledge. For instance, I loved word puzzles as they were both interesting and educational.

提案: Focus on clarity and grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid redundancy. For example, say 'I usually solve puzzles when I feel bored because it is a fun and educational way to spend time. Moreover, puzzles help keep my mind active.'

例: I usually solve puzzles when I feel bored because it is a fun and educational way to spend time. Moreover, puzzles help keep my mind active and improve my knowledge.

提案: Improve sentence structure and grammar. Use linking words to compare and explain. For example, 'I prefer word puzzles because they are interesting and enjoyable, and they improve cognitive skills. On the other hand, number puzzles are more difficult for me since I have not tried them much.'

例: I prefer word puzzles because they are interesting and enjoyable, and they help improve my cognitive skills. On the other hand, number puzzles are more difficult for me since I have not tried them much.

提案: Make your answer more coherent and grammatically correct. Use linking words to list benefits. For example, 'Yes, I believe it is important for elderly people to do puzzles because they enhance memory, improve cognitive skills like problem-solving and vocabulary, and provide a good way to spend their free time.'

例: Yes, I believe it is important for elderly people to do puzzles because they enhance memory, improve cognitive skills such as problem-solving and vocabulary, and provide a good way to spend their free time.

× Yes, I've already remember time when I was child.

✓ Yes, I already remember the time when I was a child.

The verb 'remember' should be in the present tense 'remember' to match 'I already'. Also, the article 'a' is needed before 'child' to specify a singular noun.

× Yes, I've already remember time when I was child.

✓ Yes, I already remember the time when I was a child.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'time' to specify a particular time being referred to.

× I mostly prefer to solve the puzzles because it enhances memory as well as it's interesting as I mostly love to play word puzzles because it's very interesting, can also enhance my knowledge.

✓ I mostly prefer to solve puzzles because they enhance memory and are interesting. I mostly love to play word puzzles because they are very interesting and can also enhance my knowledge.

The definite article 'the' is unnecessary before 'puzzles' when speaking generally. Also, pronouns should agree in number with their antecedents ('puzzles' plural, so 'they').

× And yes, when I was child I surely do puzzles.

✓ And yes, when I was a child I surely did puzzles.

The article 'a' is needed before 'child' to indicate singular noun. Also, past tense 'did' is appropriate for past action.

× And yes, when I was child I surely do puzzles.

✓ And yes, when I was a child I surely did puzzles.

The verb 'do' should be in past tense 'did' to match the past time frame 'when I was a child'.

× Well I mostly prefer to sold puzzles when I feel bored because at that time I have nothing to do.

✓ Well, I mostly prefer to solve puzzles when I feel bored because at that time I have nothing to do.

The verb 'sold' is incorrect; the base form 'solve' is needed after 'prefer to'. 'Sold' is past tense of 'sell' and does not fit here.

× So I mostly prefer to solve puzzle because it's a fun way to spend a quality of time and also it enhances knowledge.

✓ So I mostly prefer to solve puzzles because it's a fun way to spend quality time and also it enhances knowledge.

The plural 'puzzles' is appropriate here. Also, 'a quality of time' is incorrect; it should be 'quality time' without 'a'.

× So I mostly prefer to solve puzzle because it's a fun way to spend a quality of time and also it enhances knowledge.

✓ So I mostly prefer to solve puzzles because it's a fun way to spend quality time and also it enhances knowledge.

The article 'a' is unnecessary before 'quality time' as it is an uncountable noun phrase.

× As a word, puzzle is the best way to keep the mind active as well as enhances.

✓ As a word puzzle, it is the best way to keep the mind active as well as enhance it.

The phrase 'As a word puzzle' needs clarification and 'it' should be used as subject. Also, 'enhances' needs an object; 'enhance it' is correct.

× As a word, puzzle is the best way to keep the mind active as well as enhances.

✓ As a word puzzle, it is the best way to keep the mind active as well as enhance it.

The definite article 'the' is correct before 'mind' but the verb 'enhances' needs an object; 'enhance it' is appropriate.

× Well, I mostly like to doing the word puzzles as it's very interesting and it's a really enjoyable way to spend quality of time and it's also improve the cognitive skills as according to me number puzzles is somehow difficult for me because I never tried it to.

✓ Well, I mostly like doing word puzzles as they are very interesting and a really enjoyable way to spend quality time. They also improve cognitive skills. According to me, number puzzles are somehow difficult because I have never tried them.

'Like to doing' is incorrect; 'like doing' is correct. 'The word puzzles' should be 'word puzzles' generally. 'Quality of time' should be 'quality time'. Subject-verb agreement: 'number puzzles are' not 'is'. 'Never tried it to' is incorrect; 'never tried them' is correct.

× According to me number puzzles is somehow difficult for me because I never tried it to.

✓ According to me, number puzzles are somehow difficult for me because I have never tried them.

The phrase 'according to me' is better with a comma. 'Tried it to' is incorrect; 'tried them' is correct. Also, subject-verb agreement corrected.

× Yes, as per my perspective it's very necessary for all peoples to solve the puzzles because it enhances their memory as well as it also in increased their cognitive skills such as problem solving and also vocabulary as well as old age have a lot of time so they spend it.

✓ Yes, from my perspective, it's very necessary for all people to solve puzzles because it enhances their memory and also increases their cognitive skills such as problem solving and vocabulary. Also, old people have a lot of time, so they spend it doing puzzles.

'Peoples' is incorrect plural; 'people' is correct. 'The puzzles' should be 'puzzles' generally. 'In increased' is incorrect; 'increases' is correct. 'Old age have' is incorrect; 'old people have' is correct.