Puzzles— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 文法ミスに注意し、より自然な表現を使いましょう。例えば、「I did not did」ではなく「I did not do」と言います。また、冗長な表現を避け、簡潔に答えることが大切です。

例: No, I did not do puzzles in my childhood because I preferred outdoor games. I found puzzles confusing and too complex for me.

提案: 文法の細かいミスを直し、より流暢に話せるようにしましょう。例えば、「Doing puzzle」ではなく「Doing puzzles」と複数形にし、「during those moment」ではなく「during those moments」と複数形にします。

例: I usually do puzzles when I feel bored, especially when I am alone. For example, I enjoy playing Sudoku on my phone because it helps me relax and refresh my mind. Doing puzzles is a good way to pass the time and challenge myself mentally during those moments.

提案: 語彙の誤りや文法ミスを直しましょう。例えば、「war puzzles」ではなく「word puzzles」、「normal puzzles」より具体的な表現を使いましょう。また、文の構造を整理して、意味が明確になるようにしましょう。

例: I like doing word puzzles more than number puzzles because they are more challenging. Since I am good at numbers, number puzzles are easier for me.

提案: 文法と語彙の誤りを修正し、より明確で自然な表現を使いましょう。例えば、「helped keeps」ではなく「helps keep」、「sounding wasn't required concentration」ではなく「puzzles require concentration」などです。

例: Yes, I think it is very good for older people to do puzzles because it helps keep their brains active and improves their memory. For example, puzzles require concentration and problem-solving skills, which can prevent mental decline. Many people of all ages enjoy puzzles because they are both fun and challenging.

× No, I did not did any puzzle in my silo because uh, I like outdoor games rather than this this kind of indoor sports.

✓ No, I did not do any puzzles in my silo because, uh, I like outdoor games rather than this kind of indoor sports.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'did not did' which is a double past tense. The auxiliary 'did' already indicates past tense, so the main verb should be in base form 'do'. Also, 'puzzle' should be plural 'puzzles' to match the context. To improve, use 'did not do' and pluralize 'puzzles'.

× No, I did not did any puzzle in my silo because uh, I like outdoor games rather than this this kind of indoor sports.

✓ No, I did not do any puzzles in my silo because, uh, I like outdoor games rather than this kind of indoor sports.

The word 'puzzle' should be plural 'puzzles' because 'any' is used with plural countable nouns. Also, 'this this' is a repetition and should be corrected to 'this'.

× No, I did not did any puzzle in my silo because uh, I like outdoor games rather than this this kind of indoor sports.

✓ No, I did not do any puzzles in my silo because, uh, I like outdoor games rather than this kind of indoor sports.

The phrase 'in my silo' is likely a mishearing or typo; if 'silo' is intended as a place, it may be correct, but if not, it should be clarified. Assuming 'silo' is correct, the preposition 'in' is acceptable. However, the repeated word 'this' is an error and should be removed.

× I like to do war puzzles rather than normal puzzles because I find it more complex and I have to think a lot since I'm good at number.

✓ I like to do word puzzles rather than normal puzzles because I find them more complex and I have to think a lot since I'm good at numbers.

The word 'war' is likely a typo for 'word'. Also, 'it' should be 'them' to agree with the plural 'puzzles'. 'Number' should be plural 'numbers' to refer to the subject area. To improve, correct the typo and use plural pronouns and nouns appropriately.

× I like to do war puzzles rather than normal puzzles because I find it more complex and I have to think a lot since I'm good at number.

✓ I like to do word puzzles rather than normal puzzles because I find them more complex and I have to think a lot since I'm good at numbers.

The pronoun 'it' does not agree with the plural noun 'puzzles'; it should be 'them'. Also, 'number' should be plural 'numbers' to refer to the subject area.

× So I prefer doing number rather than normal puzzle and I find normal puzzle easier.

✓ So I prefer doing numbers rather than normal puzzles and I find normal puzzles easier.

'Number' and 'puzzle' should be plural 'numbers' and 'puzzles' to match the context of multiple puzzles.

× Yes, I think it is very good for older people to do puzzles because it helped keeps their brain active and improves their memory.

✓ Yes, I think it is very good for older people to do puzzles because it helps keep their brain active and improves their memory.

The phrase 'helped keeps' is incorrect; 'helped' is past tense but the sentence is in present tense context. The correct form is 'helps keep' where 'helps' is present tense and 'keep' is base form after 'helps'.

× For example sounding wasn't required concentration and problem solving skill which can prevent mental decline.

✓ For example, solving puzzles requires concentration and problem-solving skills which can prevent mental decline.

The original sentence is unclear and has incorrect word usage. 'Sounding' is incorrect; likely intended 'solving puzzles'. Also, 'wasn't required' is incorrect; it should be 'requires'. 'Problem solving skill' should be plural 'problem-solving skills'. To improve, rephrase for clarity and correct word choice.

× For example sounding wasn't required concentration and problem solving skill which can prevent mental decline.

✓ For example, solving puzzles requires concentration and problem-solving skills which can prevent mental decline.

'Concentration' is uncountable and correct, but 'problem solving skill' should be plural 'skills' to indicate multiple abilities.

× And so many people of all age enjoy puzzle because they are both fun and challenging.

✓ And so many people of all ages enjoy puzzles because they are both fun and challenging.

'Age' should be plural 'ages' to refer to different age groups. 'Puzzle' should be plural 'puzzles' to match the plural subject 'people'.