Jewelry— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答不够连贯，语法错误较多，表达不自然。建议使用完整句子，清晰表达原因，并避免重复。

例: I don't often wear jewelry because it makes me feel uncomfortable and I am prone to allergies.

提案: 回答中有语法和词汇错误，表达不清晰。建议直接说明喜欢的饰品类型，并解释原因，使用正确的词汇和句子结构。

例: I really like earrings because they make my face look smaller. I usually wear them with fashionable clothes.

提案: 回答不完整且语法错误严重，表达不清楚。建议用完整句子说明是否购买饰品，并解释购买的原因。

例: Yes, I usually buy jewelry to match my different outfits.

提案: 回答表达不流畅，语法错误较多。建议用完整句子说明原因，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: Some people wear a piece of jewelry for a long time because it makes them feel more confident, and sometimes they simply like wearing it.

× Actually now be 'cause I think. Wearing jewelry. Makes me feel uncomfortable and so easy to get allergies.

✓ Actually, now, because I think wearing jewelry makes me feel uncomfortable and it is so easy to get allergies.

句子结构混乱，缺少主谓一致，且断句不合理。应将断句合并，确保主语和谓语完整，表达清晰。

× I really like their RE eurospy 'cause it come make my face look small.

✓ I really like their RE eurospy because it makes my face look small.

动词come与主语it不一致，第三人称单数应使用makes。

× I usually wear it weighs fashion clothes.

✓ I usually wear it with fashion clothes.

动词weighs用错，应使用介词with表示“和……一起”。

× Actually, yes, I like. By the frame can of jewelry. So that my different clothes.

✓ Actually, yes, I like buying different kinds of jewelry so that I can match my different clothes.

句子中代词使用错误，且句子不完整，需补充动词和连接词，使表达完整。

× Sometimes. Is come make some more confident and sometimes they just like to wear it.

✓ Sometimes, it makes people more confident, and sometimes they just like to wear it.

句子结构不完整，缺少主语，动词形式错误，应补充主语it并调整动词形式。