Jewelry— Part 1 採点レポート

× No, I don't often wear that kind of things because I'm still a student and those, uh, jewelries are expensive.

✓ No, I don't often wear those kinds of things because I'm still a student and those, uh, pieces of jewelry are expensive.

The phrase 'that kind of things' is incorrect because 'kind' should be followed by a singular noun or 'kinds' for plural. Also, 'jewelries' is incorrect; 'jewelry' is an uncountable noun, so 'pieces of jewelry' is the correct form.

× While I don't know much about jewelry, so I can I can only distinguish them from different colors.

✓ While I don't know much about jewelry, I can only distinguish it by different colors.

The pronoun 'them' is incorrect because 'jewelry' is uncountable and singular, so 'it' should be used. Also, 'from different colors' should be 'by different colors' to express the method of distinction.

× For me, I prefer to wear jewelries in blue.

✓ For me, I prefer to wear jewelry in blue.

'Jewelries' is incorrect because 'jewelry' is an uncountable noun and does not have a plural form.

× No, hardly ever, because I usually receive jewelries from other peoples like my family members or my friends who love jewelries.

✓ No, hardly ever, because I usually receive jewelry from other people like my family members or my friends who love jewelry.

'Jewelries' is incorrect; 'jewelry' is uncountable. Also, 'peoples' is incorrect in this context; 'people' is the correct plural form for persons.

× Well, from my perspective, I believe, uh, people who wear jewelry for a long time because a shows their unique taste and emotional attachment on, uh, those kind of or types jewelries.

✓ Well, from my perspective, I believe people wear jewelry for a long time because it shows their unique taste and emotional attachment to those kinds or types of jewelry.

The sentence has structural errors: 'because a shows' should be 'because it shows'; 'attachment on' should be 'attachment to'; 'those kind of or types jewelries' should be 'those kinds or types of jewelry' to correctly use plural forms and prepositions.