Jewelry— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了主要意思，但有语法错误和用词不当，例如“that kind of things”应为“that kind of thing”，“jewelries”应为“jewelry”。建议使用更自然的表达，并避免语法错误。

例: No, I don't often wear jewelry because I am still a student and jewelry is usually expensive.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，如“While I don't know much about jewelry, so I can I can”。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用正确的单复数形式。

例: I don't know much about jewelry, but I prefer to wear blue-colored pieces.

提案: 回答表达清楚，但“jewelries”应为“jewelry”，“other peoples”应为“other people”。建议注意单复数和不可数名词的正确使用。

例: No, I hardly ever buy jewelry because I usually receive it from my family members or friends who love jewelry.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，如“because a shows”，“emotional attachment on those kind of or types jewelries”。建议简化句子，使用正确的搭配和表达。

例: I think people wear jewelry for a long time because it shows their unique taste and they have an emotional attachment to those pieces.

× No, I don't often wear that kind of things because I'm still a student and those, uh, jewelries are expensive.

✓ No, I don't often wear those kinds of things because I'm still a student and those, uh, pieces of jewelry are expensive.

The phrase 'that kind of things' is incorrect because 'kind' should be followed by a singular noun or 'kinds' for plural. Also, 'jewelries' is incorrect; 'jewelry' is an uncountable noun, so 'pieces of jewelry' is the correct plural form.

× While I don't know much about jewelry, so I can I can only distinguish them from different colors.

✓ While I don't know much about jewelry, I can only distinguish it by different colors.

The pronoun 'them' is incorrect because 'jewelry' is uncountable and singular, so 'it' should be used. Also, 'from different colors' should be 'by different colors' to express the method of distinction.

× For me, I prefer to wear jewelries in blue.

✓ For me, I prefer to wear jewelry in blue.

'Jewelries' is incorrect because 'jewelry' is an uncountable noun and does not have a plural form. Use 'jewelry' instead.

× No, hardly ever, because I usually receive jewelries from other peoples like my family members or my friends who love jewelries.

✓ No, hardly ever, because I usually receive jewelry from other people like my family members or my friends who love jewelry.

'Jewelries' is incorrect; 'jewelry' is uncountable. Also, 'peoples' is incorrect in this context; 'people' is the correct plural form of 'person'.

× Well, from my perspective, I believe, uh, people who wear jewelry for a long time because a shows their unique taste and emotional attachment on, uh, those kind of or types jewelries.

✓ Well, from my perspective, I believe people who wear jewelry for a long time do so because it shows their unique taste and emotional attachment to those kinds or types of jewelry.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'a shows' is incorrect; it should be 'it shows'. 'Those kind of' should be 'those kinds of' to agree in number. 'Jewelries' is incorrect; use 'jewelry'. Also, 'attachment on' should be 'attachment to'.