Geography— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: In English (Cambodia), you should try to give a more complete and natural answer by explaining why you like geography. Avoid very short answers and add some details to make your response more interesting.

例: I really enjoy studying geography because it helps me understand the world better and learn about different countries and cultures.

提案: Try to use correct grammar and vocabulary. For example, use 'know' instead of 'now'. Also, add more specific reasons why geography is useful to make your answer clearer and more natural.

例: Yes, geography is very useful because it helps us understand the location of countries and important features on the map, especially in our own country.

提案: Focus on clear sentence structure and correct grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific about what you learned. Avoid unclear phrases like 'the natural what can it happen in the future'.

例: Yes, I learned geography when I was in grade school. It was an interesting subject because it taught me about the locations in our country and how the weather can change in the future.

提案: Try to speak clearly and use correct vocabulary. Avoid confusing phrases like 'the end is saying that is surrounded our country and planet' and 'Calamity Jane'. Explain your reasons simply and clearly.

例: Yes, I want to be a geography teacher because I enjoy helping students learn about the maps of our country and the natural environment around us.

提案: Use complete sentences and correct grammar. Explain your ideas clearly and use linking words to connect your points. For example, explain how knowing geography helps with travel planning.

例: Yes, I want to learn more about the geography of other countries because understanding their weather and locations can help me plan trips better.

× I find it is very good.

✓ I find it very good.

The verb 'find' is followed directly by an adjective without 'is' in this context. Saying 'I find it very good' is correct; adding 'is' is unnecessary and incorrect here.

× Yes, I think geography is definitely useful because we can now the map of the world, especially in our country.

✓ Yes, I think geography is definitely useful because we can know the map of the world, especially our country.

The word 'now' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'know'. Also, 'in our country' is better expressed as 'especially our country' to indicate focus.

× Yes, I have our learn geographies in I was in great and it was an incredible subject because it can help me to know about the location in our country and about the weather, the natural what can it happen in the future?

✓ Yes, I have learned geography when I was in grade school and it was an incredible subject because it helped me to know about the locations in our country and about the weather, the natural events that can happen in the future.

The sentence has multiple errors: 'have our learn geographies' should be 'have learned geography'; 'I was in great' should be 'I was in grade school'; 'can help' should be 'helped' to match past tense; 'location' should be plural 'locations'; 'the natural what can it happen' is incorrect and should be 'the natural events that can happen'.

× Yes, I definitely want to be your geography teacher because I love to help my student of what the map of our country and I will tell them about the end is saying that is surrounded our country and planet. Especially the Calamity Jane.

✓ Yes, I definitely want to be a geography teacher because I love to help my students understand the map of our country and I will tell them about the land that surrounds our country and planet, especially the Calamity Jane.

The sentence has pronoun and article errors: 'your geography teacher' should be 'a geography teacher'; 'my student of what the map' should be 'my students understand the map'; 'the end is saying that is surrounded' is incorrect and should be 'the land that surrounds'; 'Calamity Jane' likely refers to 'Calamity Jane' but context unclear, kept as is.

× Yes, I will learn more about the geography of other countries because if we know about the geography of other country, clearly we definitely can. No, the weather, it's country and we can plan for the trip as well.

✓ Yes, I will learn more about the geography of other countries because if we know about the geography of other countries, we can clearly understand the weather, its country, and we can plan trips as well.

The sentence has errors in singular/plural and sentence structure: 'other country' should be 'other countries'; 'clearly we definitely can. No, the weather, it's country' is unclear and corrected to 'we can clearly understand the weather, its country'; 'plan for the trip' is better as 'plan trips'.