Geography— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子结构混乱，且有口语填充词“you know”，建议简化句子结构，避免口语化表达，使回答更自然流畅。

例: To be honest, I didn't like geography very much because it was one of the hardest subjects for me in high school.

提案: 语法错误较多，如“might going to be”应为“might be”或“am going to be”，表达不够清晰。建议使用正确的时态和表达方式，简洁明了地说明理由。

例: I don't think geography is very useful for me because I plan to be a physiologist, and this job doesn't require much knowledge of geography.

提案: 回答中存在时态错误和词汇使用错误，如“learn”应为“learned”，“clause”应为“class”，表达不清晰。建议注意时态一致，使用正确词汇，并简洁表达经历。

例: Yes, I last learned geography in high school. I took the class with my best friend David. At first, I thought it would be easy, but it turned out to be quite difficult for me.

提案: 句子结构混乱，语法错误多，如“I'm lack of”应为“I lack”，“not too much is interested”表达错误。建议使用简单句，清晰表达自己的观点。

例: Definitely not. First of all, I lack knowledge of geography, and I am not very interested in teaching.

提案: 词汇拼写错误，如“Geografico”应为“geographical”，句子结构不够自然。建议使用正确词汇，简洁表达未来计划和理由。

例: I might learn more geographical information about other countries in the future because I enjoy traveling, so I think it's necessary to have some basic knowledge of geography.

× To be honest, I don't like geography too much, if I could say is one of the hardest subject for me when I was, you know, in high school.

✓ To be honest, I don't like geography too much; I would say it is one of the hardest subjects for me when I was, you know, in high school.

原句中使用了不正确的连接词“if”，导致句子结构混乱。应使用分号或连接词“and”连接两个独立句子。此外，“subject”应为复数形式“subjects”，因为指的是多个学科。建议将句子拆分或用正确连接词连接。

× To be honest, I don't like geography too much, if I could say is one of the hardest subject for me when I was, you know, in high school.

✓ To be honest, I don't like geography too much; I would say it is one of the hardest subjects for me when I was, you know, in high school.

“subject”应为复数形式“subjects”，因为这里指的是多个学科中的一个，表达“最难的科目之一”。

× I don't think it's quite essential and critical for me because in the future I might going to be a physiologist, which is not required too much knowledge about related to geography.

✓ I don't think it's quite essential and critical for me because in the future I might be a physiologist, which does not require too much knowledge related to geography.

“might going to be”是错误的用法，正确的表达是“might be”或“going to be”，不能混用。

× Yes, the last time I learn geography is back to your high school.

✓ Yes, the last time I learned geography was back in high school.

“learn”应使用过去式“learned”，因为描述的是过去的动作；“is”应改为“was”，时态一致；“your high school”应改为“high school”，避免指代错误。

× So I was taking geography, this subject with one of my best friends, David.

✓ So I was taking geography, this subject, with one of my best friends, David.

逗号使用不当，导致句子结构不清晰。应在“subject”前后加逗号，表示插入语。

× We went to this clause together.

✓ We went to this class together.

“clause”是“条款”的意思，错误使用，应为“class”（课程）。

× I thought it might be far at first, but it turns out really difficult for me.

✓ I thought it might be easy at first, but it turned out really difficult for me.

“far”用词错误，应为“easy”；“turns out”应使用过去式“turned out”，与前文时态一致。

× Definitely not. So I'm first of all I'm lack of geography knowledge myself an I'm not too much is interested in teaching.

✓ Definitely not. So first of all, I lack geography knowledge myself and I'm not very interested in teaching.

“I'm lack”应改为“I lack”，因为“lack”是动词，不用助动词“am”；“too much is interested”结构错误，应为“not very interested”；“an”应为“and”。

× I might be learning more Geografico information about other countries in the future because I'm the person who enjoyed traveling over the world, so I guess it's necessary for me to have some basic geography called knowledge.

✓ I might learn more geographic information about other countries in the future because I'm a person who enjoys traveling around the world, so I guess it's necessary for me to have some basic geography knowledge.

“might be learning”时态不合适，改为“might learn”；“Geografico”拼写错误，应为“geographic”；“the person who enjoyed”时态不对，应为“a person who enjoys”；“over the world”应为“around the world”；“geography called knowledge”表达错误，应为“geography knowledge”。