Geography— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了对地理的不喜欢和原因，但语法和表达不够准确，且句子结构较为混乱。建议使用更自然的表达方式，注意时态和主谓一致，并简洁明了地说明原因。

例: I didn't like geography in junior and senior high school because I often got bad grades and found it hard to understand how the Earth revolves around the sun.

提案: 回答表达了地理的重要性，但部分表达不够清晰，且缺少连贯的逻辑连接词。建议使用更准确的词汇，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: Definitely, I believe geography is related to many aspects of our lives. For example, understanding geography helps us respond to emergencies like rainstorms or earthquakes.

提案: 回答内容较完整，但句子较长且有重复词汇，语法时态使用不当。建议简化句子结构，注意时态一致，并避免重复。

例: Yes, I learned geography in junior high school. In senior high school, my headmaster was also my geography teacher and he helped me a lot, even though I wasn't very good at the subject.

提案: 回答表达了不想成为地理老师的原因，但句子结构不够清晰，且有语法错误。建议分句表达，注意连贯性和语法准确。

例: Definitely not. I'm not good at geography, so I feel unconfident about teaching it. Also, my major is English, which is very different, so I plan to pursue a career related to my studies.

提案: 回答表达了学习其他国家地理的意愿，但句子未完整结束，且表达不够流畅。建议完整表达观点，使用恰当的连接词，使句子更自然。

例: Definitely, I would like to learn about the geography of other countries because my English major involves understanding different cultures and landscapes, which helps me learn their backgrounds better.

× Well, I didn't like geography because in junior high school and Senior High School all get a bad grade in geography and I couldn't figure out how the earth revolve in the planet.

✓ Well, I didn't like geography because in junior high school and senior high school I got bad grades in geography and I couldn't figure out how the earth revolves in the planet.

句子中描述过去的事情，动词时态应为过去式。'all get'应改为过去式'got'，且主语不明确，改为'I got bad grades'更清晰。'revolve'应加第三人称单数形式'revolves'，因为主语是单数的'the earth'。

× I couldn't figure out how the earth revolve in the planet.

✓ I couldn't figure out how the earth revolves in the planet.

主语'the earth'是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加's'，即'revolves'。

× I couldn't figure out how the earth revolve in the planet.

✓ I couldn't figure out how the earth revolves around the planet.

动词'revolve'后应接介词'around'表示围绕某物转动，'in the planet'用法不当。

× About the ringing and the sound emergency situation when there was a rainstorm or earthquake, we should learn the knowledge about geography.

✓ Regarding the ringing and the sound emergency situations when there was a rainstorm or earthquake, we should learn knowledge about geography.

'About'用作句首不合适，改为'Regarding'更正式。'the sound emergency situation'应为复数'situations'，且不需要定冠词'the'。'learn the knowledge'中'the'不必要，改为'learn knowledge'。

× Definitely when I was a junior high school student, I have learned geography and and my geography teacher in Senior High School was our headmaster who helped me a lot in studying even though I'm not quite good at it.

✓ Definitely, when I was a junior high school student, I learned geography and my geography teacher in senior high school was our headmaster who helped me a lot in studying even though I wasn't quite good at it.

描述过去经历时，动词应使用一般过去时，'have learned'改为'learned'。'I'm not quite good at it'应改为过去时'wasn't'以保持时态一致。

× Definitely when I was a junior high school student, I have learned geography and and my geography teacher in Senior High School was our headmaster who helped me a lot in studying even though I'm not quite good at it.

✓ Definitely, when I was a junior high school student, I learned geography and my geography teacher in senior high school was our headmaster who helped me a lot in studying even though I wasn't quite good at it.

句中重复使用'and'，应删除多余的一个。

× At the same time my major knowledge in English so they are totally different major and I will definitely pursue the career which I'm learning now.

✓ At the same time, my major is English, so they are totally different majors and I will definitely pursue the career I am studying now.

'my major knowledge in English'表达不正确，应为'my major is English'。'they are totally different major'中'major'应为复数'majors'。'the career which I'm learning now'表达不自然，改为'the career I am studying now'更合适。

× Definitely, I would like to learn geography about other countries because my major English is related to different cultures and different landscapes, which is beneficial for learning the backgrounds and.

✓ Definitely, I would like to learn geography of other countries because my major, English, is related to different cultures and different landscapes, which is beneficial for learning the backgrounds.

'learn geography about other countries'应改为'learn geography of other countries'。'my major English'中'major'和'English'之间应加逗号。句末'in learning the backgrounds and.'不完整，去掉'and'。