Geography— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer more natural and concise by avoiding redundancy and using linking words to connect your ideas. Also, use a wider range of vocabulary to express your feelings more effectively.

例: To be honest, I didn't enjoy geography because it involved memorising many specific terms, which I found quite challenging.

提案: Improve coherence by using linking words and avoid repeating the word 'useful'. Also, be more specific about how geography knowledge applies to daily life.

例: Yes, I believe geography is quite useful because it helps us understand the locations of countries and their climates, which can influence travel plans and cultural awareness.

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant. To improve, you could add a linking phrase and a bit more detail to enrich your response.

例: Yes, I studied geography during secondary school since it was a compulsory subject for all students from Form 1 to Form 3, which gave me a basic understanding of the world.

提案: Avoid repetition and improve naturalness by rephrasing your answer and providing a reason with linking words.

例: No, I have never considered becoming a geography teacher because I don't enjoy the subject much.

提案: Make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy and using linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

例: Currently, I don't plan to study more about other countries' geography because I'm focusing on preparing for the IELTS exam, which is crucial for university admission.

× Yes, I have to admit that geography is useful in these subjects.

✓ Yes, I have to admit that geography is useful in this subject.

The word 'subjects' is plural, but here it refers to 'geography' which is singular. Therefore, 'these subjects' should be corrected to 'this subject' to match the singular noun 'geography'.

× So this knowledge can be applied to our daily life, which are useful.

✓ So this knowledge can be applied to our daily life, which is useful.

The relative pronoun 'which' refers to 'knowledge' (singular), so the verb should be singular 'is' instead of 'are'.

× No, I've never thought about being a geography teacher because I dislike these subjects.

✓ No, I've never thought about being a geography teacher because I dislike this subject.

The phrase 'these subjects' is plural, but the context refers to 'geography' which is singular. Therefore, 'these subjects' should be corrected to 'this subject' to maintain singular agreement.

× At the moment I do not have any plans to learn more about the geography of other countries because currently I am focusing on the IELTS exam, which are extremely important to the admission to the university program.

✓ At the moment I do not have any plans to learn more about the geography of other countries because currently I am focusing on the IELTS exam, which is extremely important to the admission to the university program.

The relative pronoun 'which' refers to 'IELTS exam' (singular), so the verb should be singular 'is' instead of 'are'.