Geography— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by making it more natural and concise. Avoid repeating phrases like 'in my school time' and try to use clearer sentence structures. Also, provide a direct topic sentence followed by specific details.

例: I enjoyed studying geography at school because I learned how to read maps and navigate different places using them.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your points. Also, avoid redundancy and incomplete sentences.

例: Yes, geography is very useful because it helps us understand maps, which show exact locations and guide us to different places.

提案: Your answer is too long and repetitive. Try to give a clear topic sentence and then add specific supporting details using linking words. Also, improve sentence structure and vocabulary for clarity.

例: Yes, I studied geography at school. My teacher explained various topics, such as maps that show locations of countries like Australia, Africa, and India.

提案: Your answer is confusing and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to express your opinion clearly and use correct sentence structures. Avoid unnecessary repetition and be concise.

例: No, I don't want to be a geography teacher because I am not very interested in the subject.

提案: Your answer is good but contains some errors and incomplete sentences. Make sure to use correct vocabulary (e.g., 'geography' instead of 'photography') and complete your thoughts. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, I am definitely interested in learning more about the geography of other countries. Understanding different landscapes, climates, and natural resources helps me appreciate the world's diversity. For example, knowing about the vast deserts in Africa or the mountains in Asia is fascinating.

× I like the geography in my school time because in my school time I have learned so many things like the map and how to go with helping of map.

✓ I liked geography in my school time because during that time I learned many things like maps and how to navigate using them.

The word 'geography' is uncountable and does not need 'the'. 'School time' should be 'during that time' or 'when I was in school'. 'Map' should be plural 'maps' because it refers to many things. 'How to go with helping of map' is incorrect; it should be 'how to navigate using maps'.

× Yes, geography is very useful for me because it's very there in the geography.

✓ Yes, geography is very useful for me because there is a lot in geography.

The phrase 'it's very there in the geography' is incorrect. The correct structure is 'there is' to indicate existence. 'A lot in geography' better expresses the idea of usefulness.

× There are so many maps are there, they are providing the how to go another place and they give the locations of exact and.

✓ There are so many maps; they provide directions to other places and give exact locations.

The sentence incorrectly repeats 'are' and uses 'the how to go another place' which is ungrammatical. 'Maps' is plural and should be followed by plural verbs. 'Provide directions' is the correct phrase. 'Locations of exact' is incomplete; it should be 'exact locations'.

× Yes, I have learned a geography in my school time.

✓ Yes, I have learned geography during my school time.

'Geography' is an uncountable noun and does not take the article 'a'. Also, 'in my school time' is better expressed as 'during my school time'.

× Like there are so many things in geography, there's maps and so many other.

✓ There are many things in geography, like maps and many others.

'There's' is a contraction of 'there is' and should be used with singular nouns. Since 'maps' is plural, 'there are' is correct. 'So many other' is incomplete; it should be 'many others'.

× The maps are providing a location that they go in object location.

✓ The maps provide locations of objects.

'Provide' is better than 'are providing' here for general facts. 'A location that they go in object location' is unclear and ungrammatical; simplified to 'locations of objects'.

× In maps there's so many things like so many places are there like Australia, Africa, India and so many others.

✓ In maps, there are many things like places such as Australia, Africa, India, and many others.

'There's' should be 'there are' for plural 'things'. The sentence structure is awkward; rephrased for clarity.

× No, I don't want to become a geography teacher because I didn't like this geography because I have no small things about geography, but I can't become a teacher in geography.

✓ No, I don't want to become a geography teacher because I don't like geography and I don't know much about it, so I can't become a geography teacher.

Mixing past and present tense incorrectly. 'Didn't like' should be 'don't like' to match the present desire. 'I have no small things about geography' is incorrect; should be 'I don't know much about geography'.

× No, I don't want to become a geography teacher because I didn't like this geography because I have no small things about geography, but I can't become a teacher in geography.

✓ No, I don't want to become a geography teacher because I don't like geography and I don't know much about it, so I can't become a geography teacher.

'Can't become' is used correctly to express inability, but the sentence needs to be clearer and consistent in tense.

× Yes, I am definitely interested in learning more about photography of other country.

✓ Yes, I am definitely interested in learning more about the geography of other countries.

'Photography' is incorrect; should be 'geography'. 'Other country' should be plural 'other countries'.

× Understanding of different landscape, climate and natural resource help me appreciate for the diversity of a world.

✓ Understanding different landscapes, climates, and natural resources helps me appreciate the diversity of the world.

Singular nouns 'landscape', 'climate', 'natural resource' should be plural to match the context. 'Help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject 'understanding'. 'Appreciate for' is incorrect; should be 'appreciate'. 'A world' should be 'the world'.

× For example, knowing about the vast desert in Africa or mountain in Asia can be.

✓ For example, knowing about the vast deserts in Africa or mountains in Asia can be helpful.

'Desert' and 'mountain' should be plural to generalize. The sentence is incomplete; added 'helpful' to complete the thought.