Geography— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然，表达不清晰，语法错误较多，建议简化句子结构，直接表达观点，并用具体例子支持。

例: I don't like geography very much because I find it difficult to remember locations and facts. For example, I often forget the names of countries and their capitals.

提案: 回答内容较好，但表达不够流畅，词汇使用不准确。建议使用更准确的词汇和连接词，使表达更自然。

例: Yes, geography is very useful because it helps us understand weather patterns and predict natural disasters. This knowledge is important for daily life, farming, and raising livestock.

提案: 回答较完整，但句子较长且缺少连接词，建议分句并使用连接词，使表达更连贯。

例: Yes, I have studied geography since middle school. It covers many topics, such as locations, countries, capitals, and weather disasters, which can be hard to remember.

提案: 语法错误较多，表达不够简洁。建议使用正确时态和简洁句子表达观点。

例: No, I don't want to be a geography teacher because I didn't do well in the subject and I lack confidence to teach it to others.

提案: 回答内容较好，但表达稍显重复，建议简化句子并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, I will learn more about the geography of other countries. Even though I no longer have classes, I plan to travel and will prepare by checking weather forecasts.

× No, I think geography is the kind of subject and I never got a high school in geography because I think some location or some knowledge about geography is hard to learn and remember.

✓ No, I think geography is a kind of subject and I never got a high score in geography because I think some locations or some knowledge about geography are hard to learn and remember.

这里'subject'前面应该用不定冠词'a'，表示“一种学科”；'high school'应为'high score'，表示“高分”；'location'应使用复数'locations'，因为指多个地点；谓语动词与复数主语保持一致，'knowledge'是不可数名词，谓语用单数'is'，但'locations'是复数，谓语用'are'。

× Yes, of course, and geography helps people to do the weather focus and to predict some natural disaster. It is useful to our daily life and farming, livestocking.

✓ Yes, of course, and geography helps people focus on the weather and predict some natural disasters. It is useful for our daily life, farming, and livestock raising.

'help people to do the weather focus'表达不自然，应改为'help people focus on the weather'；'natural disaster'应为复数'natural disasters'；'useful to'应改为'useful for'；'livestocking'不是正确词，应改为'livestock raising'。

× Yes, I have learned geography since middle school and this subject covers a lot such as location, countries, capitals or weather disasters and so on and they are hard to remember.

✓ Yes, I have learned geography since middle school and this subject covers a lot such as locations, countries, capitals, or weather disasters and so on, and they are hard to remember.

'location'应使用复数'locations'，因为指多个地点；句中逗号使用更清晰。

× No I don't. I never thought about this before because I didn't did well in geography class and I haven't got a high score in geography so that I have no confidence to teach other people geography.

✓ No, I don't. I never thought about this before because I didn't do well in geography class and I haven't got a high score in geography, so I have no confidence to teach other people geography.

'didn't did well'是错误的过去时态，正确用法是'didn't do well'；句中缺少逗号使句子更通顺。

× Yes, I will. Although I am not in high school anymore, I won't have any geography classes. I will travel other countries, so I will do some preparation for my travel to see the weather forecast.

✓ Yes, I will. Although I am not in high school anymore, I won't have any geography classes. I will travel to other countries, so I will do some preparation for my travel to check the weather forecast.

'travel other countries'缺少介词'to'，应为'travel to other countries'；'see the weather forecast'表达不准确，改为'check the weather forecast'更合适。