Geography— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear opinion and support it with specific details. Use simple and natural English, and avoid unrelated or confusing phrases.

例: I like geography because it helps me understand different countries and their weather patterns. For example, I enjoy studying maps and climate charts to learn how weather affects people's lives.

提案: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear grammar and vocabulary. Focus on giving a clear opinion and explain why geography is useful with specific reasons. Use simple linking words to connect your ideas.

例: Yes, I think geography is useful because it teaches us about different countries and their history. For instance, learning about maps helps us understand where places are located and how people live there.

提案: Your answer is confusing and does not directly address the question. Give a clear response about your experience learning geography and provide specific examples. Avoid unrelated words and improve sentence structure.

例: Yes, I have studied geography at school. I learned about plants, animals like giraffes, and agriculture. I also use my mobile phone to learn more about these topics.

提案: Your answer is unclear and does not directly answer the question. Clearly state your desire and reasons for becoming or not becoming a geography teacher. Use simple sentences and relevant vocabulary.

例: Yes, I want to be a geography teacher because I enjoy the subject and want to help others learn about the world. Teaching will allow me to share my knowledge and inspire students.

提案: Your answer is somewhat clear but can be improved by using better vocabulary and linking words. Give specific reasons why you want to learn more and mention examples.

例: Yes, I want to learn more about the geography of other countries, especially their weather. For example, I am interested in how climate affects agriculture in different regions.

× Things are like your office because I'd like to study many geographic graphs of different countries, and I like to know about the situations of weather, which is a process of geography.

✓ Things are like your office because I'd like to study many geographic graphs of different countries, and I like to know about the weather situations, which is a part of geography.

The phrase 'situations of weather' is incorrect; 'weather situations' is the correct plural form. Also, 'a process of geography' is better expressed as 'a part of geography' to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× Yes, you know he is very useful because it provides them many information to country about their historic country as lighter describes some geography expense like about another and the summaries.

✓ Yes, you know it is very useful because it provides a country with much information about its history, as described in some geography texts and summaries.

The pronouns 'he' and 'them' are incorrectly used; 'it' should refer to geography. 'Many information' is incorrect; 'much information' is the correct quantifier. The sentence structure is unclear and has been corrected for clarity.

× Plants Alan Giraffe and my classmate. I have geographic subject and I learn about agriculture better and others in my mobile.

✓ Plants, Alan Giraffe, and my classmate. I have a geography subject and I learn about agriculture and other topics better on my mobile.

The sentence lacks articles and proper plural forms. 'Geographic subject' should be 'a geography subject'. 'Others' is vague and corrected to 'other topics'. 'In my mobile' is corrected to 'on my mobile' for proper preposition use.

× Yes, I want to go to picture because I study geography for some artificial and now I am pursuing my further education from industry about developing and also are very many forms to be referred to visit and school.

✓ Yes, I want to become a teacher because I study geography for some purpose, and now I am pursuing further education in the field of development. There are also many opportunities to visit schools and other places.

The phrase 'go to picture' is incorrect; it should be 'become a teacher'. 'From industry about developing' is unclear and corrected to 'in the field of development'. Prepositions and sentence structure have been improved for clarity.

× Yes, according to my last question, I like to learn about geography of efficiency. Mainly in geography I like to learn about weather of different countries.

✓ Yes, as I mentioned earlier, I like to learn about the geography of different countries. Mainly, I like to learn about the weather in different countries.

The phrase 'geography of efficiency' is unclear and corrected to 'geography of different countries' to fit context. Prepositions 'about weather of' is corrected to 'about the weather in' for proper usage.