Geography— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够自然，且内容重复。建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并使用更准确的词汇。

例: I don't like geography because I found it difficult and boring since primary school, and my scores were always low.

提案: 回答中有重复，且用词不准确（如plants应为places），建议避免重复，使用正确词汇，并用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: Yes, I think geography is useful because it helps us understand the places we live in, including the climate and natural phenomena.

提案: 回答较完整，但语法和表达不够准确，建议注意时态和句子结构，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, I studied geography for about four years during primary school and the first year of high school. When I had the option to continue, I chose not to.

提案: 回答直接但表达略显简单，建议丰富理由，使用更自然的表达方式。

例: Definitely not. Geography is not my favorite subject, and I don't plan to become a teacher in the future.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰，建议简化句子，注意冠词和复数形式，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: Even though I don't like geography, I might learn about the geography of cities I plan to visit when I travel.

× my geography scores is so bad

✓ my geography scores are so bad

这里的主语是复数形式的'scores'，谓语动词应该用复数形式'are'，而不是单数形式'is'。主谓一致错误。

× I really don't have any interested about geography

✓ I really don't have any interest in geography

'interested'是形容词，不能用作名词，应该用名词'interest'。同时，'interested about'是不正确的搭配，正确的介词搭配是'interest in'。

× the plants that we lived

✓ the places that we live

这里的'plants'应为'places'，因为语境中指的是我们居住的地方，而不是植物。同时，'lived'是过去式，应该用现在时'live'，因为描述的是一般事实。

× we can know the climate or the phenomenon in the plant

✓ we can know the climate or the phenomenon in the place

同上，'plant'应为'place'，表示地点。

× I've learned geography about four years

✓ I've learned geography for about four years

表示持续时间时，应该用'for'而不是省略。

× when I can choose to study geography or not in the second of the high school

✓ when I could choose to study geography or not in the second year of high school

'can'应改为过去时态'could'，'second of the high school'应为'second year of high school'。

× the geography is really not my type

✓ geography is really not my type

'the'在这里不需要，'geography'作为学科名词通常不加冠词。

× when I have to do some travel plan about the city that I want to go

✓ when I have to make some travel plans for the city that I want to go to

'do some travel plan'应改为'make some travel plans'，'about the city'应改为'for the city'，并且'go'后面需要加介词'to'。

× maybe I will learn some the geography of that cities

✓ maybe I will learn some geography of those cities

'some the geography'中'the'多余，'cities'前应使用指示代词'those'而非'that'，因为是复数。