Geography— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应更自然流畅，避免重复表达“very much”，并且提供更具体的理由来支持喜欢地理的观点。

例: I really enjoy geography because it helps me understand the world better and I find it fascinating to learn about different places and cultures.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰，应使用连贯的句子并具体说明地理知识如何帮助旅行。

例: Yes, geography is very useful for me because it helps me navigate new places and understand local customs when I travel.

提案: 回答语法错误严重，表达不清晰，建议简洁明了地说明学习经历，并避免重复。

例: Yes, I studied geography a lot when I was in school, and my teacher explained many interesting facts about the subject.

提案: 回答应更自然，避免重复“in my mind”，并且可以更具体地说明为什么不想当老师。

例: No, I don't want to be a geography teacher because I prefer working in business where I can earn more money and have more control over my career.

提案: 时态使用不当，应保持时态一致，并且可以更具体地说明学习地理的计划或目的。

例: Yes, I want to travel around the world, so I plan to learn more about the geography of different countries to prepare for my trips.

× Yes, I think geography is useful very much because I like traveling so it makes me don't lose my way and make me know the local announcement.

✓ Yes, I think geography is very useful because I like traveling, so it helps me not to lose my way and helps me know the local announcements.

原句中“makes me don't lose my way”结构不正确，动词后不能直接接否定形式，应该用“helps me not to lose my way”表达帮助不迷路的意思；另外“make me know”应改为“helps me know”，更符合习惯用法。

× When I was a student, I learned geography very much. Because I learned geography very much, my teacher teach me very about geography learnings.

✓ When I was a student, I learned a lot of geography. Because I learned a lot of geography, my teacher taught me a lot about geography.

原句中“my teacher teach”时态错误，应该用过去式“taught”，因为描述的是过去发生的事情；另外“very about geography learnings”表达不自然，改为“a lot about geography”更准确。

× Yes, I wanted to travel all around the world, so I must learn more about the geography of other countries.

✓ Yes, I want to travel all around the world, so I must learn more about the geography of other countries.

原句中“wanted”使用了过去式，但根据上下文应表达现在或将来的愿望，故应使用现在时“want”。

× No, I don't want to be a geography teacher because I don't want to be a teacher in my mind. I want to be a boss because I want to make more money for me.

✓ No, I don't want to be a geography teacher because I don't want to be a teacher in my mind. I want to be a boss because I want to make more money for myself.

“make more money for me”中“me”用法不当，应该用反身代词“myself”，表示为自己赚更多钱。