Geography— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然流畅，表达有语法错误且用词不当，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用更准确的词汇表达观点。

例: I don't like geography very much because it requires memorizing many facts, which I find challenging and a bit boring.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，建议使用正确的时态和句型，避免重复，表达更具体的理由。

例: Yes, I think geography is useful because I often travel both internationally and within my country, so knowing about different places helps me a lot. However, I still find some aspects challenging.

提案: 回答内容重复且语法错误较多，建议简洁明了地说明学习经历，避免重复表达。

例: Yes, I have learned geography. It is a compulsory subject in Chinese secondary and high schools, so almost everyone studies it during their education.

提案: 表达不清且有语法错误，建议使用正确的句型和词汇，清楚表达自己的观点并给出理由。

例: No, I don't want to be a geography teacher because I am not good at the subject and I find it quite challenging and boring.

提案: 回答较好，但表达稍显重复和不够连贯，建议使用更多连接词，简化表达，使内容更流畅。

例: I would love to learn more about the geography of other countries because it includes not only physical features like mountains but also cultural aspects, which help me understand different cultures better.

× Every Chinese people have to learn more courses on the about secondary school and high school.

✓ Every Chinese person has to learn more courses about secondary school and high school.

“Every”后面应接单数名词，不能用复数“people”，应改为单数“person”。此外，动词要与单数主语一致，改为“has”。

× And almost every Chinese people, if they go to the secondary school and the senior school, they must learn the geography.

✓ And almost every Chinese person, if he or she goes to secondary school and senior school, must learn geography.

“Every”后面应接单数名词，不能用复数“people”，应改为单数“person”。动词也要与单数主语一致，改为“goes”。

× I think it is a challenging and a little bit boring for me 'cause we all know we had to understand and keep a lot of memories of the geography.

✓ I think it is challenging and a little bit boring for me because we all know we have to understand and keep a lot of memories of geography.

“we had to”时态不对，应为现在时“we have to”，因为表达的是普遍事实。

× But actually I didn't can handle them really well and I think it is still a little bit kind of challenge for me.

✓ But actually I couldn't handle them really well and I think it is still a little bit of a challenge for me.

“didn't can”是错误的助动词用法，应使用“couldn't”表示过去不能。

× Actually, yes, 'cause you know, I have a lot of, a lot of opportunity to traveling around the world and around our country.

✓ Actually, yes, because you know, I have a lot of opportunities to travel around the world and around our country.

“opportunity to traveling”中“to”后应接动词原形“travel”，且“a lot of opportunity”应为复数“a lot of opportunities”。

× I think it is not a little bit boring.

✓ I think it is a little bit boring.

“not a little bit boring”表达不自然且含义矛盾，应直接说“a little bit boring”。

× Just like I mentioned, I didn't good at the geography.

✓ Just like I mentioned, I am not good at geography.

“didn't good”语法错误，应使用“am not good”表示现在状态。

× And almost every Chinese people, if they go to the secondary school and the senior school, they must learn the geography.

✓ And almost every Chinese person, if they go to secondary school and senior school, they must learn geography.

“the secondary school”和“the senior school”前不需要定冠词“the”，同理“the geography”应为“geography”。

× I'd love to 'cause we all know the geography is not only about the mountains, about a lot of sightseeing.

✓ I'd love to because we all know geography is not only about mountains and a lot of sightseeing.

“about the mountains”中“the”不必要，且“about a lot of sightseeing”应改为“and a lot of sightseeing”更通顺。

× It is really interest because it can help you to understanding some other countries and their local culture.

✓ It is really interesting because it can help you to understand some other countries and their local culture.

“interest”应为形容词“interesting”，且“help you to understanding”中“understanding”应为动词原形“understand”。