Geography— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议使用更准确的时态和表达方式，同时避免冗余。可以简洁明了地表达观点，并补充具体细节。

例: I didn't like geography in high school, but after traveling to many places in China, I have become more interested in the different regions and their unique features.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，建议使用完整句子并具体说明地理学的实用性，避免重复和模糊表达。

例: Absolutely. Geography is useful because it helps us understand the diverse climates in China, such as the frequent droughts in northern regions.

提案: 回答较为完整，但语法和表达仍需改进。建议使用更自然的表达方式，注意时态一致，并补充具体学习经历。

例: Yes, I studied geography in high school, usually once or twice a week. It was a bit difficult for me back then, but now I am eager to learn it again.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不连贯的问题，建议简洁明了地表达观点，并使用连贯的句子结构。

例: No, I don't want to be a geography teacher because I am not very knowledgeable in this subject. However, I am interested in learning more about geography since it helps us understand the world better.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和地名表达不准确，建议使用正确的地名和语法，补充具体细节，使表达更自然流畅。

例: Yes, I enjoy traveling around China and learning about different regions. For example, the beaches in Hainan are beautiful, and the mountains in Shanxi and Shandong provinces are impressive.

× Actually, I didn't like geography when I was a high school student, but now as I go in for many places all around the China so I am more interesting about the different areas and features of the places.

✓ Actually, I didn't like geography when I was a high school student, but now as I have been to many places all around China, I am more interested in the different areas and features of the places.

句中“go in for many places”用法不当，应使用现在完成时“have been to”表示经历过的动作；“interesting”是形容词，表示“有趣的”，应使用“interested”表示“感兴趣的”；“all around the China”中“the”不应出现，国家名前一般不加冠词。

× Absolutely, yes. And the geography are very different in the places of China, for example in the North China the areas often drought in some areas. So they they are really think that.

✓ Absolutely, yes. And the geography is very different in the places of China. For example, in North China, some areas often suffer from drought. So they really think that.

“geography”是不可数名词，谓语应使用单数“is”；“the North China”中“the”不应使用；“the areas often drought”表达错误，应改为“some areas often suffer from drought”；句子结构混乱，需分句并调整表达。

× Of course, yes. And I have learned geography when I was a high school student. We almost learned it once or two week actually. I think it's a little bit difficult for me at that time, but now I really want to learn it again.

✓ Of course, yes. And I learned geography when I was a high school student. We learned it almost once or twice a week actually. I think it was a little bit difficult for me at that time, but now I really want to learn it again.

“have learned”与“when I was”时间状语不匹配，应使用一般过去时“learned”；“once or two week”数量表达错误，应为“once or twice a week”；“it's a little bit difficult”时态不对，应为过去时“it was”。

× Absolutely not, because I don't really know much about the geography and I am not good at it so it. But if I have a chance I am keen to learn it because the geography is really useful to understand the world.

✓ Absolutely not, because I don't really know much about geography and I am not good at it. But if I have a chance, I am keen to learn it because geography is really useful to understand the world.

“the geography”中“the”不应使用；“not good at it so it”结构混乱，应去掉多余的“so it”；句子缺少逗号，影响理解。

× Yes, and I like traveling around China. When I travel to different areas, I will know the features of various region. For example, the beach in Hainan is very beautiful and the mountains in Shanxi Ocean Dong province is also tremendous.

✓ Yes, and I like traveling around China. When I travel to different areas, I learn about the features of various regions. For example, the beach in Hainan is very beautiful and the mountains in Shanxi and Dongying provinces are also tremendous.

“various region”应为复数“various regions”；“I will know”时态不合适，改为一般现在时“learn about”；“Shanxi Ocean Dong province”表达错误，应为“Shanxi and Dongying provinces”；“mountains ... is”主谓不一致，应为“are”。