Geography— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较为自然且内容相关，但句子结构稍显复杂且有语法错误，建议简化句子结构，注意主谓一致，并使用更准确的表达。

例: I like geography because it helps me learn about different landscapes and weather around the world, which broadens my horizons.

提案: 回答内容有些模糊，‘trouble’用词不准确，建议使用更具体的词汇如‘natural disasters’或‘bad weather’，并且句子表达应更流畅。

例: Yes, geography is useful, especially for understanding natural disasters. For example, if we know the weather patterns in advance, we can prepare necessary items before a storm.

提案: 回答基本符合要求，但存在语法错误，如‘showed us with’应为‘showed us’，‘weather pattern’应为复数。建议注意语法和细节表达。

例: Yes, I learned geography in high school. My teacher often showed us beautiful landscapes from around the world and taught us about different weather patterns in specific areas.

提案: 回答清晰且表达了个人观点，但‘which I haven't’表达不完整，建议补充完整句子，提升表达准确性。

例: Not at all. Although I am interested in geography, I don't have the teaching skills required to be a geography teacher.

提案: 回答内容合理，但句子结构稍显冗长，建议简化表达并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: Maybe. When I plan to travel to another country, I usually learn about its geography in advance to better organize my trip.

× Although I got low grades in geography when I was at high school, I still think it is interesting because we can know about the sceneries and different weather all over the world which expand our horizons.

✓ Although I got low grades in geography when I was at high school, I still think it is interesting because we can know about the scenery and different weather all over the world which expands our horizons.

“sceneries”应为不可数名词“scenery”，表示风景；“weather”是不可数名词，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数“expands”，因为主语是“which”指代前面的内容，视为单数。

× Sure. I think geography is useful especially for trouble. For example, if we know the weather pattern in advance, we can prepare what we should bring before the trouble.

✓ Sure. I think geography is useful especially for trouble. For example, if we know the weather patterns in advance, we can prepare what we should bring before the trouble.

“weather pattern”应使用复数形式“weather patterns”，因为指的是多种天气模式。

× Sure, I have learned geography when I was in high school. My geography teacher often showed us with beautiful landscapes all over the world and taught us different weather pattern from specific areas.

✓ Sure, I learned geography when I was in high school. My geography teacher often showed us beautiful landscapes all over the world and taught us different weather patterns from specific areas.

“have learned”与“when I was in high school”时间状语不匹配，应使用一般过去时“learned”。“showed us with”错误，正确用法是“showed us”。“weather pattern”应为复数“weather patterns”。

× Not at all, though I show some great interest in geography. I think being a geography teacher requires great teaching skills, which I haven't.

✓ Not at all, though I show some great interest in geography. I think being a geography teacher requires great teaching skills, which I don't have.

“which I haven't”结构不完整，应改为“which I don't have”表示“我没有那些技能”。

× Maybe especially when I want to travel to another country, I usually know the geography of the country in advance in order to plan my trip better.

✓ Maybe, especially when I want to travel to another country, I usually learn about the geography of the country in advance in order to plan my trip better.

“know the geography”表达不准确，通常用“learn about the geography”表示学习了解。