Geography— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了对地理的喜爱，但句子结构不够清晰，存在语法错误和表达不连贯的问题。建议简化句子，直接表达观点，并用具体例子支持，同时注意语法和逻辑连贯。

例: I like geography because it helps us understand environmental problems. For example, by studying geography, scientists can learn how human activities cause damage and find ways to protect the environment.

提案: 回答中表达了地理的实用性，但句子重复且结构混乱。建议避免重复，使用连词使句子更流畅，并具体说明地理如何帮助理解气候变化及其影响。

例: Yes, geography is useful because it helps students develop critical and creative thinking. For instance, it teaches us how climate change affects the world and encourages us to find solutions to these problems.

提案: 回答内容较丰富，但表达不够准确，存在重复和语法错误。建议使用更准确的词汇，避免重复，并用连词连接句子，使表达更自然。

例: Yes, I studied geography in secondary school. We researched neighboring countries and learned about different cultures around the world. We also studied how climate change forms and affects the environment.

提案: 回答中存在词汇使用错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议使用简单明了的句子，直接表达愿望，并说明原因，避免使用错误词汇。

例: If I had the chance, I would consider becoming a geography teacher because I find it fascinating. Teaching geography would help me understand how the world works and how ecosystems support human life.

提案: 回答中信息表达不清，词汇使用不当。建议简化句子，明确表达学习计划，并具体说明课程内容，避免使用错误或模糊的词汇。

例: Yes, I plan to learn more about the geography of other countries. Currently, I am taking a course called Global Technology, which covers topics like agricultural development and pollution in different countries.

× Yes, studying geography is very useful because participate in geography activities helps help students to develop their critical thinking and creative thinking on to understand how the climate change, how the climate change will affect the world as I hope and how to find solution to solve it.

✓ Yes, studying geography is very useful because participating in geography activities helps students to develop their critical thinking and creative thinking to understand how climate change will affect the world as I hope and how to find solutions to solve it.

动词后接动名词形式时，表示动作的进行或习惯性行为。这里“participate”应改为“participating”，表示参与地理活动。

× Yes, studying geography is very useful because participate in geography activities helps help students to develop their critical thinking and creative thinking on to understand how the climate change, how the climate change will affect the world as I hope and how to find solution to solve it.

✓ Yes, studying geography is very useful because participating in geography activities helps students to develop their critical thinking and creative thinking to understand how climate change will affect the world as I hope and how to find solutions to solve it.

“solution”应使用复数形式“solutions”，因为这里指的是多种解决方案。

× I really like geography because it can help humans to protect their environmental damage and examine its caused.

✓ I really like geography because it can help humans to protect the environment from damage and examine its causes.

“protect their environmental damage”表达不当，应为“protect the environment from damage”，表示保护环境免受破坏。

× I really like geography because it can help humans to protect their environmental damage and examine its caused.

✓ I really like geography because it can help humans to protect the environment from damage and examine its causes.

“its caused”中的“its”指代不明，应改为“its causes”，表示“它的原因”。

× So it allows the which is important for allowing the scientific to study over the past decade and learn from the history.

✓ So it allows scientists to study over the past decade and learn from history, which is important.

句子结构混乱，缺少主语和谓语，且“the scientific”应为“scientists”。调整句子结构使其通顺。

× Yes, I definitely learned about the geography at my secondary school.

✓ Yes, I definitely learned about geography at my secondary school.

“learned”使用正确，表示过去发生的动作。此句无错误。

× During that time, we conducted research and studied the topic about the neighboring, neighboring countries and learn from different culture all around the world.

✓ During that time, we conducted research and studied the topic of neighboring countries and learned from different cultures all around the world.

“studied the topic about”应改为“studied the topic of”，表示研究某个主题。

× During that time, we conducted research and studied the topic about the neighboring, neighboring countries and learn from different culture all around the world.

✓ During that time, we conducted research and studied the topic of neighboring countries and learned from different cultures all around the world.

“culture”应为复数“cultures”，表示多种文化。

× And also sometimes we learn the formations of the climate change.

✓ And also sometimes we learned about the formations of climate change.

描述过去的学习经历，动词应使用过去时“learned”。

× If I have that opportunity, I would say I would consider it as an auction because I found it very fantastic in under it because I can get again a deeper understanding of how this world operate and how the ecosystem benefit our human activity.

✓ If I had that opportunity, I would say I would consider it as an option because I find it very fantastic because I can gain a deeper understanding of how this world operates and how the ecosystem benefits our human activity.

“If I have”应为虚拟语气“if I had”；“auction”应为“option”；“in under it”表达错误，删除；“get again”应为“gain”；“operate”应为第三人称单数“operates”；“benefit”应为第三人称单数“benefits”。

× If I have that opportunity, I would say I would consider it as an auction because I found it very fantastic in under it because I can get again a deeper understanding of how this world operate and how the ecosystem benefit our human activity.

✓ If I had that opportunity, I would say I would consider it as an option because I find it very fantastic because I can gain a deeper understanding of how this world operates and how the ecosystem benefits our human activity.

主语为单数时，动词需加-s或-es，故“operate”改为“operates”，“benefit”改为“benefits”。

× Yes, I would say I will learn more about the geography of other countries and currently I'm taking a course called the Global Technology, which involves very anonymous geography knowledge about other world countries and such as the agriculture developments and how the pollution form at that.

✓ Yes, I would say I will learn more about the geography of other countries and currently I'm taking a course called Global Technology, which involves extensive geography knowledge about other countries, such as agricultural developments and how pollution forms there.

“pollution form at that”表达错误，应为“pollution forms there”；“anonymous”用词不当，应为“extensive”或“broad”。

× Yes, I would say I will learn more about the geography of other countries and currently I'm taking a course called the Global Technology, which involves very anonymous geography knowledge about other world countries and such as the agriculture developments and how the pollution form at that.

✓ Yes, I would say I will learn more about the geography of other countries and currently I'm taking a course called Global Technology, which involves extensive geography knowledge about other countries, such as agricultural developments and how pollution forms there.

“about other world countries”表达不自然，应为“about other countries”；“such as the agriculture developments”中“the”多余，应去掉。