Geography— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ như 'I'm not really have'. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng và tránh dùng từ không phù hợp như 'sucker for geography'. Hơn nữa, câu trả lời hơi dài dòng và không rõ ràng. Hãy cố gắng trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng hơn.

例: Honestly, I'm not very interested in geography, but I understand that it helps us learn about the world and its features.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng thiếu sự mạch lạc và kết thúc câu không hoàn chỉnh. Bạn nên sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn và tránh kết thúc đột ngột. Ngoài ra, hãy chú ý ngữ pháp và phát âm chính xác.

例: Yes, I think geography is very useful because it helps us understand how the world is connected globally, and it teaches us about important issues like climate change and global warming, as well as ways to address these problems.

提案: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như 'countenance' không phù hợp trong ngữ cảnh này. Câu cũng khá dài và thiếu sự liên kết rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và chia câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn.

例: Yes, I studied geography in primary and secondary school. We learned about climate change, natural resources, and ways to protect the environment and save the planet.

提案: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp như 'prefer to learning' và cách diễn đạt chưa tự nhiên. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc đúng và tránh lặp lại thông tin không cần thiết. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng hơn.

例: No, I don't want to be a geography teacher because I'm more interested in subjects like math and science. I only studied geography to expand my knowledge about the Earth.

提案: Câu trả lời có ý tốt nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và câu cuối không hoàn chỉnh. Bạn nên sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và chú ý đến sự chính xác của động từ và danh từ số ít, số nhiều.

例: Yes, I will continue learning about the geography of other countries because it helps me understand my own country better and how to protect it. Although geography can be a bit dry, it is very eye-opening and helpful.

× To be honest, I'm not really have a real sucker for geography, but I know that geography brings benefits to everyone like it will tell about the world.

✓ To be honest, I don't really have a real liking for geography, but I know that geography brings benefits to everyone, like it tells about the world.

The phrase 'I'm not really have' is incorrect because 'have' should not follow 'am' in this context. Instead, use 'I don't really have'. Also, 'a real sucker for' is informal and awkward here; 'a real liking for' is more appropriate. Additionally, 'it will tell about the world' should be 'it tells about the world' to match present tense and subject-verb agreement.

× Oh yes, because learning about geography helps you know how world connects globally and learn about climate changes, global warming and how to deal with that problem. So I think learning.

✓ Oh yes, because learning about geography helps you know how the world connects globally and learn about climate change, global warming, and how to deal with those problems. So I think learning is important.

Missing definite article 'the' before 'world' is needed. 'Climate changes' should be 'climate change' as an uncountable noun. 'That problem' should be plural 'those problems' to refer to multiple issues. The last sentence fragment 'So I think learning.' is incomplete and needs to be completed for clarity.

× Ah yes, in primary and secondary school I've learned about geography and countenance, climate changes and natural resources, and we also learned about how to protect the environment and save the planet by some.

✓ Ah yes, in primary and secondary school I've learned about geography and continents, climate change, and natural resources, and we also learned about how to protect the environment and save the planet in some ways.

'Countenance' is incorrect; the correct word is 'continents'. 'Climate changes' should be 'climate change'. The phrase 'by some' is incomplete and unclear; 'in some ways' clarifies the meaning. The tense is consistent with present perfect and past simple as appropriate.

× No, because I'm just not really interested in geography. I prefer to learning about math, science and figures numbers. So I don't really learn about geography, I just learned it to broaden my heart and know more about earth.

✓ No, because I'm just not really interested in geography. I prefer learning about math, science, and figures or numbers. So I don't really learn about geography; I just learned it to broaden my mind and know more about the Earth.

'Prefer to learning' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer learning' or 'prefer to learn'. 'Figures numbers' is unclear; 'figures or numbers' is better. 'Broaden my heart' is an incorrect expression; 'broaden my mind' is the correct idiom. 'Earth' should be capitalized as it is a proper noun.

× Yes I will because I know learning geography helps me to know more about my country and how to protect them efficiently. Moreover, geography is a bit dry but it's really pretty eye opening and help me.

✓ Yes, I will because I know learning geography helps me to know more about my country and how to protect it efficiently. Moreover, geography is a bit dry but it's really pretty eye-opening and helps me.

Missing comma after 'Yes'. 'Protect them' is incorrect because 'country' is singular; it should be 'protect it'. 'Eye opening' should be hyphenated as 'eye-opening'. 'Help me' should be 'helps me' to agree with singular subject 'geography'.