Geography— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应避免重复和语法错误，保持语言自然流畅。可以简洁表达观点，并适当补充具体原因。

例: I don't like geography because I found it confusing in high school, especially understanding maps and locations.

提案: 回答应更直接并使用连贯的连接词，详细说明为什么觉得地理有用或无用。避免模糊表达。

例: I didn't find geography useful in high school because I struggled to understand map symbols, which made the subject confusing for me.

提案: 回答时应更完整，使用连接词使句子连贯，并具体说明学习的内容或程度。

例: I studied some geography in school, but I focused more on chemistry and biology, so I didn't learn much about geography.

提案: 回答应更自然流畅，避免断句不完整，清晰表达自己的职业选择理由。

例: I don't want to be a geography teacher because I found the subject confusing. I would prefer to teach biology instead.

提案: 回答应避免语法错误和重复，表达更清晰，使用连接词使句子连贯。

例: I probably won't study geography further unless my research requires it, as I am not interested in the subject.

× When I was a high school student, I didn't think geography is useful at all because I was confused with the content.

✓ When I was a high school student, I didn't think geography was useful at all because I was confused with the content.

这里使用过去时态描述过去的想法，主句用了过去时（didn't think），从句也应使用过去时（was），保持时态一致。

× when I was in high school, I chose chemistry and biology as my subject.

✓ when I was in high school, I chose chemistry and biology as my subjects.

这里提到两个科目（chemistry and biology），应使用复数形式subjects，表示多个科目。

× If I could be a teacher, I may choose. Biology teachers.

✓ If I could be a teacher, I may choose to be a biology teacher.

这里表达选择成为一名生物老师，teacher应为单数形式，且句子结构不完整，需补充完整表达。

× If my research requires me to do that, I may do a like a little bit about geography, but.

✓ If my research requires me to do that, I may do a little bit of geography, but.

短语中“do a like a little bit about geography”结构混乱，应改为“do a little bit of geography”，正确使用介词of。

× I was quite confused with geography.

✓ I was quite confused about geography.

表达“对……感到困惑”时，正确搭配介词是about，而不是with。