Geography— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中表达了个人观点，但语言稍显重复，且缺少连贯的连接词。建议减少重复，使用连接词使表达更流畅，并丰富细节。

例: I'm not very fond of geography because I find it challenging to memorize all the map details. Therefore, I prefer subjects like biology or chemistry, which I find more interesting and easier to understand.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不连贯的问题，建议注意句子结构，避免重复，并用连接词使内容更连贯。

例: I don't think geography is very useful nowadays because we rely on technology like GPS for navigation. Moreover, I haven't learned enough to apply geographical knowledge in daily life.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，句子断裂，表达不连贯。建议练习完整句子表达，避免断句，使用连接词丰富内容。

例: No, I didn't formally study geography in high school because I found it hard to remember all the map details and symbols. Instead, I focused on chemistry and biology, which I found easier and more enjoyable.

提案: 回答表达了观点，但句子结构简单且重复。建议合并句子，使用连接词，使表达更自然流畅。

例: No, I don't want to be a geography teacher because I find the subject confusing and teaching requires a lot of patience, which I lack. Also, since I struggle with geography myself, I don't think I could teach it effectively.

提案: 回答中存在自相矛盾和语法错误，表达不清晰。建议理清思路，避免矛盾，使用完整句子表达观点。

例: Honestly, I am not interested in geography. If I travel abroad, I prefer to learn about the local culture rather than the geography of the country.

× If I can choose, I may choose biology or chemistry.

✓ If I could choose, I would choose biology or chemistry.

这里使用虚拟语气表达假设情况，应该用过去式的情态动词could和would，而不是can和may。

× I find it difficult to remember all the details on the map.

✓ I find it difficult to remember all the details of the map.

英语中表示“地图的细节”应使用介词of，而不是on。

× And I don't have deep understanding of geography and apply it to. And apply it in daily lives.

✓ And I don't have a deep understanding of geography or apply it in daily life.

句子中缺少冠词a，且apply后面缺少宾语，且daily life是不可数名词，不能用复数形式。

× No, I haven't formally learned geography when I was in high school.

✓ No, I didn't formally learn geography when I was in high school.

这里描述过去发生的动作，应该用一般过去时didn't learn，而不是现在完成时haven't learned。

× I've have difficulty in learning all the details and symbols on the maps.

✓ I've had difficulty in learning all the details and symbols on the maps.

这里应该用现在完成时的正确形式have had，而不是I've have。

× So if I can choose. I will choose. Chemistry or biology? Because I learn them well.

✓ So if I could choose, I would choose chemistry or biology because I learn them well.

句子断裂且时态不一致，应合并为完整句子并使用虚拟语气。

× And I'm also confused with geography.

✓ And I'm also confused about geography.

confused后应接about表示对某事感到困惑，而不是with。

× Besides, I have difficulty in learning. Geography, so I definitely cannot teach geography.

✓ Besides, I have difficulty in learning geography, so I definitely cannot teach it.

避免重复使用geography，第二处用it代替更自然。

× So I want learn more about geography in other countries.

✓ So I want to learn more about geography in other countries.

动词want后应接不定式to learn，而不是直接接动词原形learn。