Geography— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答缺乏连贯性，语法错误较多，且内容重复。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免冗余，并注意语法时态和主谓一致。

例: I'm not very interested in geography because I find it hard to memorize facts. Therefore, I didn't choose it in high school and my grades were quite poor.

提案: 回答不够清晰，表达含糊且语法错误严重。建议明确表达观点，使用完整句子，并提供具体理由。

例: I think geography is less useful nowadays because we can use apps to find locations easily.

提案: 回答不完整且语法混乱，缺少具体信息。建议直接回答问题，补充具体细节，并注意句子结构。

例: Yes, I studied geography in high school, but I found it very difficult and my scores were low.

提案: 回答较为清晰，但表达略显简单。建议丰富词汇，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I don't want to be a geography teacher because I'm not interested in the subject. Instead, I prefer math, which I find more engaging.

提案: 回答表达不清，语法错误较多。建议简洁明了地表达意愿，使用正确的语法和词汇。

例: If I have the opportunity, I would like to learn more about the geography of other countries because it can broaden my knowledge.

× So I didn't choose that when I was in my high school and my grades in geography is so bad.

✓ So I didn't choose that when I was in my high school and my grades in geography were so bad.

这里的主语是复数形式“grades”，谓语动词应该用复数形式“were”，而不是单数“is”，这是单复数不一致的问题。

× No, I believe geography is useless for the current people because we have some applications that can tell us how to get it is very.

✓ No, I believe geography is useless for people nowadays because we have some applications that can tell us how to get there easily.

句中“the current people”表达不自然，改为“people nowadays”更合适；“how to get it is very”结构混乱，应改为“how to get there easily”，使句子通顺。

× Speaking of this, it brings my memory back to the time when I was at high school and the geography is so was difficult for me.

✓ Speaking of this, it brings my memory back to the time when I was at high school and geography was so difficult for me.

“the geography is so was difficult”中“is”和“was”时态混用且“the geography”中“the”不必要，应去掉“the”并使用过去时“was”。

× If I remember rightly, my score is.

✓ If I remember rightly, my score was low.

原句不完整，缺少谓语和补充信息，补充“was low”使句子完整且符合过去时态。

× Actually, I'm not keen on geography, so being a geography teacher is not a good choice for me. I think it's so boring and I prefer maths for me.

✓ Actually, I'm not keen on geography, so being a geography teacher is not a good choice for me. I think it's so boring and I prefer maths.

“prefer maths for me”中“for me”多余，英语中表达偏好时不需要加“for me”，去掉更自然。

× Speaking of lies, if I have a good choice to learn some knowledge about geography of other countries, I will choose it because I think it is a good choice that help me learn some more.

✓ Speaking of this, if I have a good chance to learn some knowledge about the geography of other countries, I will choose it because I think it is a good choice that helps me learn more.

“Speaking of lies”应为“Speaking of this”；“a good choice to learn some knowledge”表达不当，应为“a good chance”；“geography of other countries”前应加定冠词“the”；“help”应为第三人称单数“helps”；“learn some more”中“some”多余，去掉更自然。