Geography— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在用词错误（如“stereography”应为“geography”），表达不够自然，且句子结构较为混乱。建议注意词汇准确性，简洁表达观点，并避免重复。

例: I don't like geography because I find it difficult to remember many disconnected facts. It feels hard to organize all the information in my mind.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，逻辑不连贯。建议使用连贯的句子，注意时态和语法，避免无意义的词汇。

例: Yes, I think geography is useful. For example, once my phone died in Hong Kong, and because I didn't know the area well, I had trouble finding my hotel.

提案: 回答内容重复，表达不够流畅。建议简洁明了地回答问题，避免重复表达相同观点。

例: Yes, I studied geography in junior high and high school because it is a required subject, even though I found it complicated and didn't enjoy it.

提案: 回答中语法和词汇错误较多，表达不够自然。建议使用简单清晰的句子表达观点，注意语法和词汇的准确性。

例: No, I don't want to be a geography teacher because I am not good at the subject. Teaching requires deep knowledge, which takes many years to develop.

提案: 回答不完整且含糊，表达不清晰。建议完整回答问题，使用连贯的句子，并提供具体理由。

例: Yes, I will learn more about the geography of other countries because it is part of our curriculum and important for my graduation.

× I studied stereography in my high school and I find it quite difficult for me.

✓ I studied stereography in my high school and I found it quite difficult for me.

这里描述的是过去的经历，动词时态应保持一致，'find'应改为过去式'found'。

× There is too much fragmented knowledge for me to remember and I just can't make a frame in my brain.

✓ There is too much fragmented knowledge for me to remember and I just can't make a framework in my brain.

短语'make a frame in my brain'不符合英语习惯，应使用'make a framework'表示构建知识框架。

× Although nowadays you have a map but your form might out of charge.

✓ Although nowadays you have a map, your phone might be out of charge.

'form'应为'phone'，且缺少动词be，'out of charge'前应加动词be。

× Like once I was in Hong Kong, my phone was just out of charge and because my bad geography I can't find my way back to hotel.

✓ Like once I was in Hong Kong, my phone was just out of charge and because of my bad geography I couldn't find my way back to the hotel.

时态应保持一致，描述过去事件时应使用过去时，'can't'改为'couldn't'；缺少介词'because of'；'hotel'前应加定冠词'the'。

× So it's really a terrible experience to me.

✓ So it's really a terrible experience for me.

固定搭配是'experience for someone'，'to me'用法不当。

× So I disorder.

✓ So I was disoriented.

'I disorder'结构不完整且用词错误，应使用形容词或过去分词表达状态，如'was disoriented'。

× Yes, I learned geography in my junior high school and high school because it's a compulsory curriculum in Chinese education system.

✓ Yes, I learned geography in my junior high school and high school because it's a compulsory curriculum in the Chinese education system.

'Chinese education system'前应加定冠词'the'，保持名词短语完整。

× Although I don't like it, I have to learn it because I need to graduate and I really not like geography because it's too complicated for me.

✓ Although I don't like it, I have to learn it because I need to graduate and I really don't like geography because it's too complicated for me.

缺少助动词'do'，否定句中应为'don't like'。

× Because I'm really poor at geography and I don't want to be a teacher to because I think if you want to be a teacher, you only have a great expertising in this field and it's very difficult because you need spend decades to learn it, to master it.

✓ Because I'm really poor at geography and I don't want to be a teacher too because I think if you want to be a teacher, you only have great expertise in this field and it's very difficult because you need to spend decades to learn it, to master it.

'to'应为'too'表示也；'expertising'错误，应为'expertise'；'need spend'缺少不定式'to'。

× Will you learn more about the geography of other countries?

✓ Will you learn more about the geography of other countries?

该句无语法错误，符合未来时态用法。

× Yes, because the global geography is 1 or is included in our textbook and I have to learn it in order to graduate from my school.

✓ Yes, because global geography is included in our textbook and I have to learn it in order to graduate from my school.

'the global geography is 1 or is included'结构混乱，去掉多余部分，'global geography'作为不可数名词不加冠词。