Geography— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer shows enthusiasm but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct verb forms and articles, and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: I find geography fascinating because it helps me understand the natural environment, such as mountains and rivers. For example, learning about different countries allows me to appreciate the diversity of our planet.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical mistakes. Make sure to use the correct vocabulary and sentence structure. Also, provide specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

例: Definitely yes, I think geography is very useful for everyone because it helps us understand different cultures and environments. For example, knowing about climate change can help people prepare for natural disasters.

提案: Your answer has some vocabulary mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use the correct tense and words, and try to be more specific about your learning experience.

例: Of course, I have studied geography since primary school. My school offered several lessons to help students understand the world better and improve their knowledge.

提案: Your answer is clear and well-structured with good reasons. To improve, you could add linking words to connect your ideas more smoothly and use a wider range of vocabulary.

例: No, I don't want to be a geography teacher because the job can be stressful, especially when managing students and preparing lessons. Instead, I would prefer to become a singer since I really enjoy singing and expressing myself through music.

提案: Your answer has some unclear phrases and grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your points logically.

例: Yes, I will definitely learn more about the geography of other countries because it is useful in daily life. For example, knowing about other countries' geography can improve my knowledge and help me develop a better sense of direction.

× In my opinions, I think geography is very fascinating because it's have me understand about the world including mountain, river as natural environments.

✓ In my opinion, I think geography is very fascinating because it has helped me understand the world, including mountains and rivers as natural environments.

The phrase 'In my opinions' is incorrect because 'opinion' is usually uncountable in this context, so the singular form 'opinion' should be used. Also, 'it's have me understand' is grammatically incorrect; the correct form is 'it has helped me understand' to express past experience. Additionally, 'mountain, river' should be pluralized to 'mountains and rivers' to correctly refer to multiple natural features.

× In my opinions, I think geography is very fascinating because it's have me understand about the world including mountain, river as natural environments.

✓ In my opinion, I think geography is very fascinating because it has helped me understand the world, including mountains and rivers as natural environments.

The words 'mountain' and 'river' should be pluralized to 'mountains' and 'rivers' because the sentence refers to these features in general, not a single mountain or river.

× For example, learning about various countries make me appreciate the diversity of our planet.

✓ For example, learning about various countries makes me appreciate the diversity of our planet.

The subject 'learning' is singular, so the verb should be 'makes' instead of 'make' to agree in number.

× Definitely yes, I think your office is very useful for almost individuals from my world because it's have us understand about my growth including different cultural and environment.

✓ Definitely yes, I think geography is very useful for almost all individuals in my world because it helps us understand growth, including different cultures and environments.

The phrase 'your office' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or typo; it should be 'geography'. 'Almost individuals' is incorrect; 'almost all individuals' is correct. 'My world' is vague; 'in my world' is better. 'It's have us understand' is incorrect; 'it helps us understand' is correct. 'My growth' is unclear; 'growth' without 'my' is better. 'Different cultural and environment' should be 'different cultures and environments' to be plural and correct.

× Definitely yes, I think your office is very useful for almost individuals from my world because it's have us understand about my growth including different cultural and environment.

✓ Definitely yes, I think geography is very useful for almost all individuals in my world because it helps us understand growth, including different cultures and environments.

The verb phrase 'it's have us understand' is incorrect; the correct form is 'it helps us understand' to express present tense and subject-verb agreement.

× Definitely yes, I think your office is very useful for almost individuals from my world because it's have us understand about my growth including different cultural and environment.

✓ Definitely yes, I think geography is very useful for almost all individuals in my world because it helps us understand growth, including different cultures and environments.

The preposition 'about' after 'understand' is unnecessary and incorrect; 'understand growth' is correct without 'about'.

× For example, knowing about climate change is help people prepare the natural.

✓ For example, knowing about climate change helps people prepare for nature.

The phrase 'is help' is incorrect; it should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'knowing'. Also, 'prepare the natural' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'prepare for nature'.

× Of course, I've ever learned geography since I was studying in primary school.

✓ Of course, I've learned geography since I was studying in primary school.

The adverb 'ever' is incorrectly used here; it is unnecessary and incorrect in this context. The present perfect 'I've learned' already implies experience up to now.

× My school offer a few lessons about biography to have student understand more about the works and have them enhance the knowledge.

✓ My school offers a few lessons about geography to help students understand more about the subject and enhance their knowledge.

'Offer' should be 'offers' to agree with singular subject 'My school'. 'Biography' is incorrect; it should be 'geography'. 'Have student understand' is incorrect; 'help students understand' is correct. 'The works' is vague; 'the subject' is better. 'Have them enhance the knowledge' is awkward; 'enhance their knowledge' is better.

× My school offer a few lessons about biography to have student understand more about the works and have them enhance the knowledge.

✓ My school offers a few lessons about geography to help students understand more about the subject and enhance their knowledge.

The verb 'offer' should be 'offers' to agree with the singular subject 'My school'.

× My school offer a few lessons about biography to have student understand more about the works and have them enhance the knowledge.

✓ My school offers a few lessons about geography to help students understand more about the subject and enhance their knowledge.

'A few lessons' is correct, but 'student' should be plural 'students' to match the context.

× My school offer a few lessons about biography to have student understand more about the works and have them enhance the knowledge.

✓ My school offers a few lessons about geography to help students understand more about the subject and enhance their knowledge.

The pronoun 'them' correctly refers to 'students', so no change needed here.

× My school offer a few lessons about biography to have student understand more about the works and have them enhance the knowledge.

✓ My school offers a few lessons about geography to help students understand more about the subject and enhance their knowledge.

The preposition 'about' is correct in 'lessons about geography' and 'understand more about the subject'.

× Instead, I would prefer to become a singer because I really enjoy singing and expressing myself through music.

✓ Instead, I would prefer to become a singer because I really enjoy singing and expressing myself through music.

No grammatical errors found in this sentence.

× Of course, yes, I will learn more about the geography of other countries because I think it's very convenient and useful for my life.

✓ Of course, yes, I will learn more about the geography of other countries because I think it's very convenient and useful for my life.

No grammatical errors found in this sentence.

× For example, when I know about the geography of other countries, I can't improve my knowledge and sense of belongings of direction.

✓ For example, when I know about the geography of other countries, I can improve my knowledge and sense of belonging to direction.

The phrase 'can't improve' contradicts the intended meaning; it should be 'can improve'. 'Sense of belongings of direction' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'sense of belonging to direction' or better 'sense of direction'.