Geography— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear but could be more concise and natural. Avoid redundancy such as "I like to" without completing the thought. Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and correct minor grammar issues like "not good enough good at geography". Aim for a more structured response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details.

例: When I was younger, I didn't enjoy geography because I found it hard to memorize locations. However, now I appreciate learning about different regions, their vegetation, and climates, which makes the subject much more interesting to me.

提案: Your answer covers relevant points but lacks coherence and contains some grammatical errors. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'because' to connect ideas logically. Also, avoid repeating words unnecessarily and improve sentence structure for clarity.

例: Yes, geography is very useful because it helps us understand different climates, vegetation, and animal habitats. For example, this knowledge allows us to protect endangered species and navigate unfamiliar places more easily.

提案: Your response provides some detail but is somewhat disorganised and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details linked logically. Avoid vague phrases like 'we couldn't' without completing the thought. Also, use plural forms correctly and improve sentence flow.

例: Yes, I studied geography at school, and I found it challenging to memorize different locations. Some teachers were very patient and helpful, repeating information to support us, while others were less approachable, which made learning harder.

提案: Your answer is clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid saying 'I don't have any information about this subject' if you have studied it. Instead, focus on your feelings about the profession. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

例: To be honest, I don't plan to become a geography teacher because it's not a subject I enjoy teaching, even though I have studied it before.

提案: Your answer shows enthusiasm but could be expressed more naturally. Use more precise vocabulary like 'improve my knowledge' instead of 'raise my information'. Also, try to avoid repeating 'geography' unnecessarily and link your ideas clearly.

例: Yes, I hope to learn more about the geography and vegetation of different countries because improving my knowledge in this area is very important to me.

× I couldn't memorize lots of things and I was not good enough good at geography and location.

✓ I couldn't memorize lots of things and I was not good enough at geography and locations.

The word 'location' should be plural 'locations' because it refers to multiple places, matching the plural context of 'lots of things'.

× Nowadays I like to learn about different areas, the vegetation, climate and the like, and I like to.

✓ Nowadays I like to learn about different areas, the vegetation, climate and the like, and I like it.

The phrase 'and I like to' is incomplete; it should be 'and I like it' to correctly express the idea of liking the subject mentioned.

× We can know about different climate, vegetation, different animals, natural habitat and it's really important we know about them.

✓ We can know about different climates, vegetation, different animals, natural habitats and it's really important we know about them.

The nouns 'climate' and 'natural habitat' should be plural ('climates' and 'natural habitats') to agree with 'different' and the plural context.

× We can conserve lots of animals and also protection of them and also they can navigate us easily to find our direction.

✓ We can conserve lots of animals and also protect them, and they can also help us navigate easily to find our direction.

The phrase 'protection of them' is incorrect; it should be 'protect them'. Also, 'they can navigate us' is incorrect; animals or habitats cannot navigate us, so 'they can also help us navigate' is clearer.

× During the school time we had lots of subjects about geography and it was really difficult for us to memorize them and learn about different location.

✓ During school time we had lots of subjects about geography and it was really difficult for us to memorize them and learn about different locations.

The noun 'location' should be plural 'locations' to match 'different' and the plural context.

× Some of our teachers were really friendly and they helped us and they were really patient. They repeated lots of things to educate us, but some of them were really grumpy and we couldn't.

✓ Some of our teachers were really friendly and they helped us and they were really patient. They repeated lots of things to educate us, but some of them were really grumpy and we couldn't learn from them.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'we couldn't.' It needs an object to complete the meaning, such as 'learn from them.'

× I don't have any information about this subject and I don't like to be a geography teacher.

✓ I don't have any information on this subject and I don't want to be a geography teacher.

The phrase 'information about' is acceptable but 'information on' is more common. Also, 'I don't like to be' is better expressed as 'I don't want to be' when referring to future intentions.

× Will you learn more about the geography of other countries?

✓ Will you learn more about geography of other countries?

The definite article 'the' before 'geography' is unnecessary when speaking generally about the subject.

× It's really important for me to raise my information about geography.

✓ It's really important for me to increase my knowledge of geography.

The phrase 'raise my information about' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'increase my knowledge of' when referring to learning more about a subject.