Geography— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中表达了个人感受，但句子结构较为简单且有重复，缺少连贯的连接词。建议使用更自然的表达方式，避免重复，并使用连接词使回答更流畅。

例: I don't really like geography because I often get lost even when I look at maps. Therefore, I find the subject quite challenging and not very enjoyable.

提案: 回答直接但重复使用“useful”，缺少丰富的细节和连接词。建议增加具体例子或原因，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: I believe geography is useful because it helps people understand their location and navigate to different places. Moreover, it provides knowledge about the environment and cultures around the world.

提案: 时态使用不准确，句子结构不够自然，且有语法错误。建议注意时态一致性，避免语法错误，并用连接词丰富内容。

例: Yes, I studied geography in secondary school. It was one of my main subjects, but I found it quite difficult and often failed the exams.

提案: 回答中表达不够清晰，句子冗长且重复，缺少连贯性。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I don't want to be a geography teacher because I'm not good at the subject. Also, my poor results make me feel that I lack the ability to teach it.

提案: 句子结构不够自然，语法错误较多，且缺少连接词。建议改进语法，使用连接词，并表达更具体的理由。

例: I probably won't study the geography of other countries because I already find my own country's geography quite difficult. Therefore, I don't have much interest in learning about other places.

× Actually I did not like geography because I'm easy to lose my way, although I am watching the maps.

✓ Actually I did not like geography because I'm easily lost, although I was watching the maps.

这里的错误是动词时态和表达方式不当。'I'm easy to lose my way' 应改为 'I'm easily lost'，因为这里需要用副词 'easily' 来修饰形容词 'lost'，且描述过去的情况，'am watching' 应改为过去进行时 'was watching'。

× So geography is very difficult for me and I did not like it.

✓ So geography was very difficult for me and I did not like it.

句子中描述的是过去的感受，'is' 应改为过去时 'was'，以保持时态一致。

× I think it is useful because it can help people to find their location and guide them to what they want to go.

✓ I think it is useful because it can help people find their location and guide them to where they want to go.

'help' 后面不需要 'to'，应直接接动词原形 'find'。此外，'to what they want to go' 结构不正确，应改为 'to where they want to go'。

× Yes, I study geography when I was in the secondary school.

✓ Yes, I studied geography when I was in secondary school.

描述过去的动作，'study' 应改为过去式 'studied'。此外，'the secondary school' 中 'the' 不需要，改为 'secondary school'。

× Geography is a major subject when I was studying, but it is very difficult for me and I always get fail.

✓ Geography was a major subject when I was studying, but it was very difficult for me and I always failed.

描述过去情况，'is' 应改为 'was'，'get fail' 用法错误，应改为 'failed'。

× First, I'm not good at geography, so I don't think I have that talent to teach other than I don't think I can be a teacher because of my poor result.

✓ First, I'm not good at geography, so I don't think I have the talent to teach others, and I don't think I can be a teacher because of my poor results.

'that talent' 应改为 'the talent'，'other than' 用法错误，应改为 'others'，并且句子连接应使用 'and'。

× I think I will not because study the geography of my own country is already very difficult for me, so I will not have the interest in other country.

✓ I think I will not because studying the geography of my own country is already very difficult for me, so I will not have interest in other countries.

'study' 应改为动名词 'studying'，'the interest' 中 'the' 不需要，'other country' 应为复数 'other countries'。