Geography— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应避免语法错误，如“makes me learning”应为“makes learning”。此外，回答可以更自然简洁，避免重复表达。

例: I don't really like geography because I find it hard to understand directions. For instance, I often get confused when reading maps, which makes learning geography difficult for me.

提案: 回答中存在语法和表达错误，如“a geography can build people's directions”不通顺。应使用更准确的表达，并增加连贯的连接词。

例: I believe geography is useful because it helps people understand directions and read maps when they are in unfamiliar places.

提案: 时态使用不当，“had learned”应改为“have learned”。同时，句子结构可以更自然，避免重复。

例: Yes, I have learned geography in secondary and high school, but I didn't choose it as my major because I'm not very good at it.

提案: 回答中有重复词汇“I I”，且表达不够自然。应使用更流畅的表达方式，并避免语法错误。

例: No, I don't want to be a geography teacher because I'm not very interested in the subject and I lack good direction skills.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和重复词汇，如“has has”，表达不清晰。应使用正确的语法和更具体的描述。

例: Yes, I want to learn more about the geography of other countries because they have different landscapes and beautiful geographical features.

× I often get confused when reading maps, which makes me learning geography quite difficult for me.

✓ I often get confused when reading maps, which makes learning geography quite difficult for me.

动词make后面接动词时，应使用动词的原形或动名词形式，这里应使用动名词learning，而不是me learning。

× The main reason is that a geography can build people's directions or reading maps on a stranger place.

✓ The main reason is that geography can help people build directions or read maps in a strange place.

geography是不可数名词，前面不应加不定冠词a；stranger是名词，形容词应为strange；表达更自然应使用help people build directions或read maps。

× Yes, I had learned a geography in my secondary school and high school, but I didn't choose geography as my major because I'm not good at it.

✓ Yes, I learned geography in my secondary school and high school, but I didn't choose geography as my major because I'm not good at it.

过去完成时had learned不适合此处，简单过去时learned更合适；geography为不可数名词，不加冠词a。

× No, I don't want to be a geography teacher. The reason is that I'm not very interested in geography and I I don't have more direction skills.

✓ No, I don't want to be a geography teacher. The reason is that I'm not very interested in geography and I don't have many direction skills.

direction skills是可数名词复数，使用more不合适，应使用many表示数量多。

× Oh yes, I will learn more geography of other countries because other countries has has a different geographic or some different beautiful geography scales, so I want to learn more about.

✓ Oh yes, I will learn more about the geography of other countries because other countries have different geography or some beautiful geographic features, so I want to learn more about them.

countries为复数，谓语动词应为have；geography为不可数名词，不用复数形式；句子结构不完整，需补充about them使表达完整。