Geography— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
How do you like geography?
受験者
I love geography since I was young, firstly because geography allows me to understand different cultures and different people from all over the world, and it's an interdisciplinary subject which includes both social studies and science in the same subject.
試験官
Do you think geography is useful?
受験者
Of course, because geography not only allows people to understand each other, but also allows them to know the basics about their earth and many different place from all around the world, including the place they're living in.
試験官
Have you ever learned geography?
受験者
Yes, I've been learning geography both in school and by myself. I actually enjoy learning geography by myself more because I can research on topic I have a special interest on, such as landform geology or urban planning.
試験官
Do you want to be a geography teacher?
受験者
As I have an interest towards geography, I really want to become a geography teacher when I grow up. However, I believe my teaching ability is quite low, so it might be difficult for my future students to understand what I'm teaching.
試験官
Will you learn more about the geography of other countries?
受験者
Of course, I'm currently learning the geography of India and South Asia, and in the future I'm hoping to learn more about different parts of the world, both in terms of human and physical geography. I believe it's really fun and enjoyable.
評価
総合
Part 1
How do you like geography?
スコア: 85.0提案: Your answer is good but a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to make your response more concise and avoid repeating similar ideas. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.
例: I have loved geography since I was young because it helps me understand different cultures worldwide. Moreover, it combines social studies and science, making it an interesting interdisciplinary subject.
Do you think geography is useful?
スコア: 80.0提案: Your answer is clear but could be improved by using more precise vocabulary and linking words. Also, avoid repeating 'allows' twice in the same sentence.
例: Definitely, geography is useful because it helps people understand each other and learn about the Earth and various places worldwide, including their own hometown.
Have you ever learned geography?
スコア: 90.0提案: Good answer with clear structure and relevant details. To improve, use linking words to connect your ideas and correct minor grammar errors (e.g., 'research on topics').
例: Yes, I have studied geography at school and independently. In fact, I prefer self-study because I can focus on topics I am interested in, such as landform geology and urban planning.
Do you want to be a geography teacher?
スコア: 85.0提案: Your answer is honest and clear but could be more concise. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid repeating similar phrases.
例: I am interested in geography and would like to become a teacher. However, I feel my teaching skills need improvement to help students understand the subject better.
Will you learn more about the geography of other countries?
スコア: 90.0提案: Good detailed answer with clear structure. To improve, use more varied vocabulary and linking words to enhance coherence.
例: Certainly, I am currently studying the geography of India and South Asia. In the future, I hope to explore other regions, focusing on both human and physical geography, because I find it enjoyable.
文法
× many different place from all around the world
✓ many different places from all around the world
The noun 'place' should be plural 'places' because it is preceded by 'many', which indicates more than one. In English, countable nouns following quantifiers like 'many' must be in plural form.
× I can research on topic I have a special interest on
✓ I can research topics I have a special interest in
The verb 'research' is transitive and does not require the preposition 'on'. Also, 'topic' should be plural 'topics' to match the context. The phrase 'interest on' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'interest in'.
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