Geography— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không phù hợp (ví dụ: 'you wealthy' không đúng). Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn. Hãy tránh dùng từ không đúng nghĩa và nói ngắn gọn, rõ ràng.

例: Honestly, I don't like geography very much. However, when I was in secondary school, I often watched geography videos to try to increase my interest in the subject.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ phù hợp. Câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc tốt hơn và sử dụng liên từ để làm rõ ý. Ví dụ, thay vì 'choose game of knowledge', bạn có thể nói 'playing knowledge games'.

例: Yes, I think geography is very useful, especially when it comes to finding the right travel destinations or playing knowledge games about different countries.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá rõ ràng nhưng nên tránh dùng từ không chính xác như 'guess' và nói ngắn gọn hơn. Bạn cũng nên dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: I learned geography when I was in secondary school because it was a compulsory subject. However, now that my school doesn't require it, I don't study it anymore.

提案: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và nói câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Hãy dùng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp lại ý giống nhau.

例: Honestly, no. I find geography quite complicated and difficult to remember all the information, so I don't want to be a geography teacher.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp (ví dụ: 'helped' nên là 'help') và dùng liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn. Hãy nói câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tự nhiên.

例: In the future, if I have more spare time, I will learn more about the geography of other countries because it helps me gain knowledge and is an exciting way to reduce stress.

× Honestly, I don't like you wealthy at all.

✓ Honestly, I don't like geography at all.

The pronoun 'you' is incorrectly used here. The student likely meant to refer to the subject 'geography' instead of 'you'. Using the correct noun or pronoun is essential for clarity.

× I often watch some geography videos, you know, to increase my interest in there.

✓ I often watched some geography videos, you know, to increase my interest in it.

The sentence refers to a past time ('when I was in secondary school'), so the verb should be in the past tense 'watched'. Also, 'interest in there' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'interest in it' referring to geography.

× choose game of knowledge about other location of other country.

✓ choosing games of knowledge about other locations of other countries.

After 'like', the verb should be in the '-ing' form ('choosing'). Also, 'game' should be plural 'games' to match the context, and 'location' and 'country' should be plural to indicate multiple places.

× Guess it's when I was in secondary school, you know, it's a compulsory subject that I have to learn, but now when my school doesn't require me to learn it, I don't learn it anymore.

✓ I guess it was when I was in secondary school, you know, it was a compulsory subject that I had to learn, but now my school doesn't require me to learn it, so I don't study it anymore.

The sentence mixes past and present tenses incorrectly. Since the subject is in the past, verbs should be in past tense ('was', 'had to learn'). Also, 'don't learn it anymore' is better expressed as 'don't study it anymore' for clarity.

× I can not remember all the knowledge in the field.

✓ I cannot remember all the knowledge in the field.

'Can not' is less common and often written as one word 'cannot' in formal English. Using 'cannot' is the correct modal verb form here.

× In the future if I have more spare time, I will learn about it because you know, it helped me gain more knowledge and also exciting method to reduce stress.

✓ In the future, if I have more spare time, I will learn about it because, you know, it will help me gain more knowledge and is also an exciting method to reduce stress.

The sentence mixes past tense 'helped' with future context. It should use future tense 'will help'. Also, 'exciting method' needs the verb 'is' to be grammatically correct.