Geography— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct by using singular/plural forms properly and avoiding redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, say 'I like geography because it covers many interesting subjects, and climate change is my favourite topic since I enjoy learning about the climate.'

例: I like geography because it covers many interesting subjects, and climate change is my favourite topic since I enjoy learning about the climate.

提案: Focus on clarity and coherence by using correct vocabulary and linking words. Avoid vague phrases like 'many effect' and improve sentence structure. For example, say 'Yes, definitely. Geography is useful because it covers topics like climate change and natural disasters, which provide important information about the environment.'

例: Yes, definitely. Geography is useful because it covers topics like climate change and natural disasters, which provide important information about the environment.

提案: Improve grammar and sentence structure by using correct tenses and singular/plural forms. Also, be more specific about the subjects studied. For example, say 'Yes, I studied geography in my 10th grade. I learned about physical and human geography, which I found very interesting and helpful for my studies.'

例: Yes, I studied geography in my 10th grade. I learned about physical and human geography, which I found very interesting and helpful for my studies.

提案: Make your answer more natural by correcting grammar and avoiding repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas. For example, say 'Yes, I want to be a geography teacher in the future because I have interesting ideas about the subject. Moreover, geography teachers usually have well-paying jobs, so I prefer this career.'

例: Yes, I want to be a geography teacher in the future because I have interesting ideas about the subject. Moreover, geography teachers usually have well-paying jobs, so I prefer this career.

提案: Make your answer more fluent and grammatically correct by avoiding unnecessary words and using plural forms properly. For example, say 'Yes, definitely. I would like to learn more about the geography of other countries in the future because it interests me and helps with my studies.'

例: Yes, definitely. I would like to learn more about the geography of other countries in the future because it interests me and helps with my studies.

× I like geography because there are many subject in geography which is very interesting and climate change is my most of favorite subject because I like to know more about climate.

✓ I like geography because there are many subjects in geography which are very interesting and climate change is my most favorite subject because I like to know more about climate.

The word 'subject' should be plural 'subjects' because it refers to multiple items. Also, 'which is' should be 'which are' to agree with the plural noun 'subjects'. 'Most of favorite' is incorrect; it should be 'most favorite' or better 'my favorite'. This correction improves subject-verb agreement and proper pluralization.

× Yes definitely geography is useful because there are different types of tasks into geography such as climate change, natural effect and many effect also include in this which is helpful for their information which is related to environment.

✓ Yes definitely geography is useful because there are different types of tasks in geography such as climate change, natural effects and many effects also included in this which are helpful for information related to the environment.

The word 'effect' should be plural 'effects' because it refers to multiple items. 'Into geography' is incorrect preposition; it should be 'in geography'. 'Include' should be 'included' to match past participle usage. 'Which is' should be 'which are' to agree with plural 'effects'. Also, 'their information' is unclear and corrected to 'information'. These corrections address pluralization, preposition use, and verb form.

× Yes, definitely. I was learned geography in my 10th class and there are two subject of geography which I studied which is very interesting for me, also helpful in my studies.

✓ Yes, definitely. I learned geography in my 10th class and there are two subjects of geography which I studied which are very interesting for me, also helpful in my studies.

The phrase 'was learned' is incorrect; the correct past tense is 'learned'. 'Two subject' should be 'two subjects' to match plural. 'Which is' should be 'which are' to agree with plural 'subjects'. These corrections fix past tense usage and plural agreement.

× Yes definitely geography is useful because there are different types of tasks into geography such as climate change, natural effect and many effect also include in this which is helpful for their information which is related to environment.

✓ Yes definitely geography is useful because there are different types of tasks in geography such as climate change, natural effects and many effects also included in this which are helpful for information related to the environment.

The preposition 'into' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'in' to indicate location or subject area. Also, 'related to environment' needs the definite article 'the' before 'environment'. Correct preposition use improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I like to be a geography teacher in future because there is a interesting idea I have about geography.

✓ Yes, I like to be a geography teacher in the future because I have an interesting idea about geography.

'There is a interesting idea' is incorrect because 'interesting' starts with a vowel sound and requires 'an' instead of 'a'. Also, 'in future' should be 'in the future' to be grammatically correct. The sentence structure is improved by placing 'I have' before 'an interesting idea'.

× Also geography teacher have a high paying job than I prefer to be a geography teacher in future.

✓ Also, geography teachers have high paying jobs so I prefer to be a geography teacher in the future.

'Geography teacher have' is incorrect; it should be 'geography teachers have' to agree in number. 'High paying job' should be plural 'high paying jobs' to generalize. 'Than' is incorrect here; 'so' or 'therefore' fits better to show reason. 'In future' should be 'in the future'. These corrections fix subject-verb agreement, pluralization, conjunction use, and article use.

× The countries, yes, definitely. I like to learn more about geography of other country in future because it is very interesting for me and also helpful in my studies.

✓ The countries, yes, definitely. I like to learn more about the geography of other countries in the future because it is very interesting for me and also helpful in my studies.

'Other country' should be plural 'other countries' to match 'the countries' and general meaning. 'Geography of other country' needs the definite article 'the' before 'geography'. 'In future' should be 'in the future'. These corrections improve pluralization and article use.