Geography— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了不喜欢地理的原因，但语言表达不够自然，句子结构混乱，且有语法错误。建议简化句子，使用更自然的表达方式，并避免冗长。

例: I don't like geography because I find it difficult to understand complex questions, and it takes me a lot of time. I prefer creative subjects like arts and languages because they interest me more.

提案: 回答不完整且表达不清晰，缺少连贯的逻辑和具体细节。建议完整表达观点，使用连接词使句子更连贯，并补充具体例子。

例: Yes, I think geography is useful, especially for college students. It helps them understand the world better, which can be important for getting well-paid jobs. For example, knowing about different countries can impress interviewers.

提案: 回答较为直接，但表达略显简单，且最后一句表达不够自然。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并适当扩展细节。

例: Yes, I have studied geography since middle school because it is an important subject here. I believe that if I had studied it better, I might have had more job opportunities.

提案: 回答表达了个人职业偏好，内容较丰富，但句子结构有些重复，部分表达不够地道。建议简化句子，使用更自然的表达。

例: No, I don't want to be a teacher, especially not in subjects like maths or geography. I prefer creative work like art because my dream is to become an artist. To achieve this, I want to find inspiration through painting and learning languages.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整，句子不够连贯。建议注意语法，完整表达想法，并使用连接词使内容更流畅。

例: Definitely, in the future I want to travel and visit more countries to explore different cultures. Therefore, I would like to learn more about geography online. For example, I might search for information and pictures of coastal cities to understand them better.

× No, I don't like geography at all because I think I have very poor strategies to think about some complex question what I have to accurate.

✓ No, I don't like geography at all because I think I have very poor strategies to think about some complex questions that I have to answer accurately.

句子结构混乱，'some complex question what I have to accurate'部分不符合英语表达习惯，应改为'relative clause'结构，且question应为复数questions，accurate应改为副词accurately。

× It always takes much time for me to do this difficulty, so I prefer more creative and flexible subjects, for example like the arts, languages, it spikes my interests.

✓ It always takes me a lot of time to deal with this difficulty, so I prefer more creative and flexible subjects, for example, arts and languages; they spark my interest.

'takes much time for me to do this difficulty'表达不自然，应改为'takes me a lot of time to deal with this difficulty'。'for example like'重复，应只用'for example'或'like'。'it spikes my interests'主语应为复数'they'，动词用复数形式'spark'，interest通常用单数。

× Definitely geography is quite useful especially for the college students.

✓ Definitely, geography is quite useful, especially for college students.

'the college students'中的定冠词'the'不必要，泛指大学生时应去掉。

× If they prefer to get a well paid jobs, they have to learn geography well, especially know more knowledge about the world to open their mind.

✓ If they want to get well-paid jobs, they have to learn geography well, especially know more about the world to open their minds.

'prefer to get a well paid jobs'中'prefer'用法不当，改为'want to get'更合适。'well paid'应加连字符。'know more knowledge'表达重复，应改为'know more about'。'mind'应为复数'minds'。

× If they have an interview, the interviewer always.

✓ If they have an interview, the interviewer always asks questions related to geography.

句子不完整，缺少谓语和宾语，需补充完整表达。

× Yes, I've been learning geography since middle school because here geography is one of the most crucial subjects for a student to study.

✓ Yes, I've been learning geography since middle school because geography is one of the most crucial subjects for students to study here.

'here'位置不当，应放在句尾。'a student'泛指应改为复数'students'。

× If I can learn geography better, maybe I can get a better job, but unfortunately I didn't.

✓ If I could learn geography better, maybe I could get a better job, but unfortunately I didn't.

虚拟语气中条件句应使用过去式'could'，而非现在时'can'。

× No, I don't really like to be a teacher, no matter what kinds of subjects, especially maths, geography.

✓ No, I don't really want to be a teacher, no matter what kind of subjects, especially math and geography.

'like to be'改为更自然的'want to be'。'kinds of subjects'应为'subject'单数形式。'maths'在美式英语中为'math'。

× I prefer to do more creative work like the art.

✓ I prefer to do more creative work like art.

'the art'不正确，泛指艺术时不加定冠词。

× In order to trace my dream, I would like to find more inspiration, inspired things such as painting, learning language.

✓ In order to pursue my dream, I would like to find more inspiration and inspiring things such as painting and learning languages.

'trace my dream'表达错误，应为'pursue my dream'。'inspired things'应为'inspiring things'。'learning language'应为'learning languages'。

× Definitely in the future I want to tourists and visit more countries, exploring more culture from all over the globe.

✓ Definitely in the future, I want to travel as a tourist and visit more countries, exploring more cultures from all over the globe.

'want to tourists'错误，动词后应接动词原形，改为'want to travel as a tourist'。'culture'应为复数'cultures'。

× So I definitely would like to learn more geography knowledge online.

✓ So I definitely would like to learn more about geography online.

'learn more geography knowledge'表达不自然，应改为'learn more about geography'。

× For example, I would like to searching online how's the coastal cities looks like?

✓ For example, I would like to search online how the coastal cities look like.

'would like to searching'错误，'would like to'后应接动词原形'search'。'how's'应为'how'。'cities looks'主谓不一致，应为'cities look'。

× I would like to see some pictures and use them to be my.

✓ I would like to see some pictures and use them as my inspiration.

句子不完整，缺少宾语，需补充完整表达。