Geography— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答は自然ですが、文法の誤りや冗長な表現が見られます。例えば、「so therefore」は重複表現なので避けましょう。また、具体的な詳細をもう少し明確に述べると良いです。

例: I like geography because it helps me understand the layout of my hometown, Coca. For example, although there are no schools nearby, the area is famous for its local food and beautiful tourist spots. This knowledge makes me appreciate my hometown more.

提案: 文法ミスが多く、意味が不明瞭な部分があります。具体的な例を挙げて説明し、文を簡潔にまとめる練習をしましょう。

例: Yes, I think geography is very useful because it helps me understand the unique features of my hometown and predict how it might change in the future. For example, I can learn about local climate and resources.

提案: 文が不完全で意味が伝わりにくいです。文法を正しく使い、完全な文で答える練習をしましょう。

例: I learned geography in high school. I liked it because it helped me understand the unique features of my hometown.

提案: 回答は比較的良いですが、最後の文が不完全です。理由を明確に述べ、文を完結させることが重要です。

例: No, I don't want to be a geography teacher because I am more interested in history. In high school, I enjoyed learning about historical events, so if I become a teacher, I would prefer to teach history because it helps us understand the past.

提案: 文法と語順の誤りが多く、意味が不明瞭です。簡潔で正しい文を使い、具体的な理由を述べる練習をしましょう。

例: Yes, I want to learn more about the geography of other countries because it makes me feel happy and calm. By learning about other countries, I can prepare for traveling there in the future.

× there are no schools near my house, but area is famous for its local food and beautiful place to visit

✓ there are no schools near my house, but the area is famous for its local food and beautiful places to visit

'area' and 'place' are countable nouns and require the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific area or place. Also, 'beautiful place' should be plural 'beautiful places' to match the context.

× because it allows to me allows me to know about future of my hometown

✓ because it allows me to know about the future of my hometown

The phrase 'allows to me allows me' is redundant and incorrect. The correct structure is 'allows me to'. Also, 'future' as a noun here requires the definite article 'the'.

× I have learned geography when I was in high school

✓ I learned geography when I was in high school

The present perfect tense 'have learned' is not appropriate with a specific past time 'when I was in high school'. Simple past tense 'learned' should be used.

× because it it allowed me to know. Unique features of my hometown so

✓ because it allowed me to know the unique features of my hometown

There is a repeated word 'it it' which is an error. Also, the sentence is fragmented and lacks proper structure; 'Unique' should not be capitalized mid-sentence and the sentence should be completed properly.

× Yes I will about geography with other countries

✓ Yes, I will learn about the geography of other countries

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb. Adding 'learn' and correcting the prepositional phrase improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× If I learn other country I I can go other country ****

✓ If I learn about other countries, I can go to other countries

The sentence has repeated words 'I I' and lacks prepositions 'about' and 'to' which are necessary for correct meaning. Also, 'country' should be plural 'countries' to match the context.