Geography— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a clear opinion first, then support it with specific reasons or examples. Use simple and correct sentence structures and avoid redundancy.

例: I don't really like geography because I find it boring. However, sometimes I watch the Geography Channel with my sister to pass the time. I learned some geography in high school, but it never interested me much.

提案: Your answer is confusing and lacks coherence. Clearly state your opinion and support it with logical reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid vague phrases.

例: Yes, I think geography is useful because it helps us understand the world and different cultures. Although I find it boring personally, I know it can be entertaining and educational for others.

提案: Your answer is repetitive and contains many filler words. Try to answer directly with clear sentences and provide specific details about your experience. Avoid unnecessary hesitation sounds.

例: Yes, I studied geography in college, but I didn't find it very interesting. I tried watching the Geography Channel to learn more, but I couldn't understand it well.

提案: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and unclear expressions. Clearly state your opinion and reasons. Use correct vocabulary and sentence structure to express your ideas effectively.

例: No, I don't want to be a geography teacher because I find the subject boring and difficult. Although I enjoy watching geography programs, teaching it would be challenging for me.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors. Try to give a direct answer and explain your reasons clearly. Use proper grammar and avoid vague statements.

例: No, I don't plan to study the geography of other countries in depth. However, I sometimes watch the Geography Channel to learn about animals and development in different countries.

× when my sister watch geography channel

✓ when my sister watches geography channel

The subject 'my sister' is third person singular, so the verb should be 'watches' to agree in number and person.

× that time I was to pass my time

✓ that time I was passing my time

The phrase 'was to pass' is incorrect here; the correct form is the past continuous 'was passing' to indicate an ongoing action in the past.

× Not usually it's interested for me

✓ Usually, it doesn't interest me

The pronoun 'it' should be the subject, and 'interested' should be changed to 'interest' to correctly express the feeling. Also, the sentence structure is corrected for clarity.

× most of the people lives

✓ most of the people live

The noun 'people' is plural, so the verb should be 'live' without the 's' to agree in number.

× it's make us entertainment also not a chance for gain knowledge

✓ it provides us entertainment and also a chance to gain knowledge

The original sentence has incorrect verb form and conjunction usage. 'Make' should be 'provides', and 'and' is the correct conjunction to connect the ideas.

× when I was in my college prime, that time I learnt geography

✓ when I was in college, I learned geography

The phrase 'college prime' is unclear and unnecessary; 'learned' is the correct past tense spelling in American English.

× I don't want to wear a geography teacher

✓ I don't want to be a geography teacher

The verb 'wear' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'be' to indicate the profession.

× I cannot learn about the geography of others country

✓ I cannot learn about the geography of other countries

'Others country' is incorrect; the correct plural form is 'other countries'.