Geography— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer more natural and concise. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why you find geography interesting and how it helps you in real life.

例: I really enjoy geography because it helps me understand the world better. For instance, when I travel, I can easily locate places and learn about different cultures, which makes my trips more enjoyable.

提案: Improve your grammar and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Be more specific about how geography is useful, giving clear examples. Also, avoid filler words and unclear phrases.

例: Yes, geography is very useful because it helps people understand different countries' environments and cultures. For example, when traveling abroad, knowing geography allows you to adapt quickly and navigate unfamiliar places.

提案: Make your answer clearer and more grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect your ideas. Avoid redundancy and filler words. Be specific about how you learned geography outside school.

例: Although I never formally studied geography, I was very curious as a child. Therefore, I often watched educational videos and online courses about geography to learn more.

提案: Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid filler words. Use complete sentences and linking words to explain your reasons logically. Also, correct grammar mistakes and be specific about why the profession is not suitable for you.

例: No, I do not want to be a geography teacher because I believe teaching requires strong skills to understand and support students, which I feel I lack.

提案: Make your answer more fluent and grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect your ideas. Be specific about how learning geography will help you in other countries. Avoid filler words and repetition.

例: Definitely, I try to learn as much as possible about the geography of other countries because this knowledge helps me adapt and live comfortably when I travel abroad.

× it is really interesting matter

✓ it is a really interesting subject

The word 'matter' is not appropriate here; 'subject' fits better when talking about academic topics. Also, the article 'a' is needed before 'really interesting subject' to make the sentence grammatically correct.

× And when I go anywhere that time I can easily find out our specific place

✓ And when I go anywhere, I can easily find my specific place

The phrase 'that time' is unnecessary and awkward here. Also, 'find out' is incorrect; 'find' is sufficient. 'Our specific place' should be 'my specific place' to match the speaker's perspective.

× if someone knows geography, then they can easily survival anywhere

✓ if someone knows geography, then they can easily survive anywhere

'Survival' is a noun; the verb form 'survive' should be used here to match the sentence structure.

× they can easily understand regarding their con regarding this country's condition

✓ they can easily understand the condition of this country

The phrase 'understand regarding' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'understand the condition of' to express comprehension about the country's situation.

× I didn't learn geography but I was really curious when I was kid

✓ I didn't learn geography but I was really curious when I was a kid

The phrase 'when I was kid' is missing the article 'a' before 'kid' which is necessary in English.

× I often search on YouTube or a lot of course or a lot of videos regarding geography

✓ I often search on YouTube or watch a lot of courses or videos about geography

The verb 'search' is usually followed by 'for' rather than 'on'. Also, 'a lot of course' should be plural 'courses'. 'Regarding' can be replaced with 'about' for naturalness.

× as a teacher, they have some qualification like they have to ability to understand, uh, students or, uh, they have the ability to recognize students

✓ as a teacher, one must have some qualifications like the ability to understand students and recognize them

Using 'they' to refer to 'a teacher' (singular) causes pronoun disagreement. 'One' or 'a teacher' should be used consistently. Also, 'to ability' is incorrect; it should be 'the ability'.

× So I think I'm not at

✓ So I think I'm not suitable for that

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'suitable for that' completes the thought and makes the sentence meaningful.

× if I develop my geography knowledge, uh, it will be definitely helpful for me to survive overseas people overseas country

✓ if I develop my geography knowledge, it will definitely be helpful for me to survive in overseas countries

The phrase 'survive overseas people overseas country' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'in' before 'overseas countries'. Also, 'countries' should be plural to match 'overseas'.