Geography— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答有点冗长且不够直接。建议开头直接表达你的观点，然后用具体例子支持，避免重复和犹豫。

例: I like geography a little because I enjoy visiting spectacular mountains and lakes, even though I'm not very familiar with the subject.

提案: 回答中有很多犹豫和语法错误，内容不完整。建议直接表达观点，并用具体理由支持，注意语法和连贯性。

例: Yes, geography is useful because it helps us understand the size and features of countries, which is important in daily life.

提案: 回答不完整且有重复。建议直接回答问题，结构清晰，避免多余词汇。

例: Yes, I have learned geography because it is a compulsory subject in primary, middle, and high school in China.

提案: 回答不完整且有语法错误。建议直接表达观点，并用简洁的理由支持，避免口语化和犹豫。

例: No, I don't want to be a geography teacher because I am not good at the subject.

提案: 回答中有很多犹豫和不完整的句子。建议直接表达观点，并用具体理由支持，保持句子完整和连贯。

例: No, I prefer to learn more about my own country's geography before studying other countries.

× although I'm not very, uh, familiar in the with geography

✓ although I'm not very familiar with geography

The correct preposition to use with 'familiar' is 'with', not 'in the with'. The phrase 'in the with' is incorrect and redundant. Use 'familiar with' to express knowledge or experience of a subject.

× I still believe it quite.

✓ I still believe it is quite important.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb complement. 'Believe it quite' is incorrect; it needs an adjective or phrase to complete the meaning. Adding 'is quite important' completes the sentence logically.

× it is part of compulsory curriculum in over uh, primary school, school, uh, middle school and high school.

✓ it is part of the compulsory curriculum in primary school, middle school, and high school.

The phrase 'in over uh' is incorrect and unnecessary. Also, 'compulsory curriculum' requires the definite article 'the'. The corrected sentence uses proper articles and removes filler words for clarity.

× I think it should be uh, other people like, uh, students in geography subject to the.

✓ I think it should be other people, like students who are good at geography, to do that.

The original sentence is incomplete and uses 'students in geography subject to the' incorrectly. The pronoun and phrase are unclear. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects pronoun and phrase usage.

× I don't want to know more about the geography of other countries because I, I think, uh, first of all, I should umm, learn more about my country, but uh, it's hard to uh, kick out.

✓ I don't want to know more about the geography of other countries because I think, first of all, I should learn more about my country, but it's hard to give up other interests.

The phrase 'kick out' is incorrect in this context. The intended meaning is likely 'give up' or 'abandon'. Also, filler words are removed for clarity. The correction uses appropriate expressions and prepositions.