Geography— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ như 'When I was high school' nên là 'When I was in high school'. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó dùng các chi tiết hỗ trợ ngắn gọn và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: I'm not very interested in geography because I found it hard to remember facts like climates and countries when I was in high school. Therefore, I didn't enjoy studying it much.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp, ví dụ 'it's improve' nên là 'it improves'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời có thể rõ ràng hơn bằng cách sử dụng liên từ như 'because' hoặc 'and' để kết nối ý, đồng thời tránh lặp từ và dùng từ vựng phù hợp hơn.

例: Yes, I think geography is very useful because it helps children understand their culture, environment, and climate. Moreover, it improves memory skills by connecting different types of knowledge.

提案: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như 'your office' thay vì 'geography', 'study geographies' nên là 'study geography'. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ vựng chính xác hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả.

例: Yes, I studied geography from middle school to high school. Although I wasn't very good at it, traveling to different cities has helped me learn more about the environment, culture, and climate.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp, ví dụ 'my dream isn't become' nên là 'my dream isn't to become' hoặc 'I don't want to become'. Câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn và tránh lặp từ, sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc.

例: No, I don't want to be a geography teacher because I'm not interested in the subject. However, I believe geography teachers are important because they help new generations learn about their culture and environment.

提案: Câu trả lời có một số lỗi ngữ pháp như 'and no more knowledge' nên là 'and learn more knowledge'. Bạn nên sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả.

例: Yes, I am eager to learn more about the geography of other countries because I love adventure and traveling. If I have the chance, I would like to visit other countries to learn about their culture, environment, and climate.

× When I was high school, it was difficult for me to keep remembering all the information geography lessons such as climate, earth, nature or countries.

✓ When I was in high school, it was difficult for me to keep remembering all the information from geography lessons such as climate, earth, nature, or countries.

The phrase 'When I was high school' is missing the preposition 'in' to indicate the time period. Also, 'information geography lessons' lacks the preposition 'from' to connect 'information' and 'geography lessons'. Adding these prepositions clarifies the sentence and corrects the grammar.

× So that is the reason why I'm kind of lazy to learn geographies.

✓ So that is the reason why I'm kind of lazy to learn geography.

The word 'geography' is an uncountable noun when referring to the subject, so it should not be pluralized as 'geographies'. Using the singular form is grammatically correct in this context.

× For me, studying geography is very useful and necessary nowadays because these subjects have children understand more about their culture, their areas, the environment and the climate where they live.

✓ For me, studying geography is very useful and necessary nowadays because this subject helps children understand more about their culture, their areas, the environment, and the climate where they live.

The phrase 'these subjects have children understand' is incorrect. 'These subjects' should be singular 'this subject' because 'geography' is singular here. Also, 'have children understand' is incorrect; the correct verb phrase is 'helps children understand'. This correction improves subject-verb agreement and verb usage.

× Also, it's improve our memory skill because every day you connect with a variety of knowledge.

✓ Also, it improves our memory skills because every day we connect with a variety of knowledge.

The contraction 'it's' should be 'it' followed by the verb 'improves' to agree with the singular subject. 'Memory skill' should be plural 'memory skills' to be natural. The pronoun 'you' is inconsistent with the rest of the sentence and should be 'we' to maintain consistency.

× Of course, I used to learn your office from middle school to high school.

✓ Of course, I used to learn geography from middle school to high school.

The phrase 'learn your office' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or typo. It should be 'learn geography' to make sense in context. 'Used to' correctly indicates past habitual action.

× I often study geographies.

✓ I often study geography.

'Geography' as a subject is uncountable and should not be pluralized as 'geographies'. Using the singular form is correct here.

× But now I'm grow up and travel to many cities around, I improve my knowledge of the environment, culture and climate.

✓ But now I've grown up and traveled to many cities around, I have improved my knowledge of the environment, culture, and climate.

The phrase 'I'm grow up' is incorrect; the present perfect 'I've grown up' is appropriate to indicate a change up to now. Similarly, 'travel' should be past tense 'traveled' to match the time frame. 'I improve' should be 'I have improved' to indicate a completed action affecting the present.

× So my dream isn't become geography teacher.

✓ So my dream isn't to become a geography teacher.

The phrase 'isn't become' is incorrect; it should be 'isn't to become' to express the intended meaning. Also, 'geography teacher' needs the article 'a' before it.

× But in my opinion, geography teacher is necessary to teach the new generations know more about their culture, their environment, their area and what they live in.

✓ But in my opinion, a geography teacher is necessary to teach the new generations to know more about their culture, their environment, their area, and where they live.

The phrase 'geography teacher is necessary' needs the article 'a' before 'geography teacher'. Also, 'teach the new generations know' is incorrect; it should be 'teach the new generations to know'. 'What they live in' is better expressed as 'where they live'.

× I am absolutely ready to learn more about geography of another country because I'm into adventure and taking a trip is my hobby.

✓ I am absolutely ready to learn more about the geography of another country because I'm into adventure and taking trips is my hobby.

The phrase 'geography of another country' needs the definite article 'the' before 'geography'. Also, 'taking a trip is my hobby' is better expressed as 'taking trips is my hobby' to indicate a general activity.

× So if I have a chance, I'm willing to take a flight to another country and no more knowledge about their culture, the area, the environment and the climate.

✓ So if I have a chance, I'm willing to take a flight to another country and learn more about their culture, the area, the environment, and the climate.

The phrase 'no more knowledge' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'learn more knowledge' or simply 'learn more'. Adding the verb 'learn' clarifies the intended meaning.