Geography— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear but a bit lengthy and slightly repetitive. Try to be more concise and avoid repeating phrases like 'that are'. Also, start with a direct response and then add a reason using linking words such as 'because' or 'since'.

例: I don't like geography because I find it difficult to remember many facts. Instead, I prefer practical subjects like economics that involve real-life applications.

提案: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear, but there are some grammatical errors and missing linking words. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'also' properly, and ensure subject-verb agreement, e.g., 'it is also helpful'.

例: Yes, geography is very useful because it helps us understand climate, geographical features, and environmental issues. For example, it plays an important role in urban planning.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but is a bit long and has grammatical mistakes. Try to use shorter sentences and correct article usage, e.g., 'a very difficult subject'. Also, use linking words like 'because' to explain your opinion.

例: Yes, I studied geography as part of my school curriculum. I found it a very difficult subject because it involved memorizing many details and data.

提案: Your answer is clear but can be improved by using linking words and correcting grammar. For example, say 'subjects I like more' as 'subjects I like better' and 'real life applications' as 'real-life applications'.

例: No, I don't want to be a geography teacher because I prefer subjects with practical, real-life applications like economics.

提案: Your answer is relevant but a bit long and has grammatical errors. Use correct articles like 'a challenging subject' and improve sentence structure. Also, use linking words like 'because' to explain your reason clearly.

例: No, I would not learn more about the geography of other countries because I have found it a challenging subject since childhood, especially learning maps and geographical details.

× And honestly speaking I do not like geography because I find it difficult.

✓ Honestly speaking, I do not like geography because I find it difficult.

Starting a sentence with 'And' is generally considered informal and unnecessary in formal speech or writing. Removing 'And' improves sentence clarity and formality.

× It has lots of data and details to remember which is an issue for me, rather than I like to learn subjects that are that are made practical and hands on like economics.

✓ It has lots of data and details to remember, which is an issue for me. Rather, I like to learn subjects that are practical and hands-on, like economics.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'rather than' to contrast ideas. 'Rather' is the correct conjunction here to express preference. Also, 'that are that are' is a repetition error and 'hands on' should be hyphenated as 'hands-on' when used as an adjective.

× It is important to learn about the climate countries, their geographical features and environmental issues.

✓ It is important to learn about the climate of countries, their geographical features, and environmental issues.

The phrase 'climate countries' is incorrect; it should be 'climate of countries' to properly express the relationship. Also, commas are added for clarity in the list.

× Besides that, it also helpful in urban planning.

✓ Besides that, it is also helpful in urban planning.

The sentence is missing the verb 'is' to be grammatically correct. Adding 'is' completes the sentence structure.

× I found geography very difficult subject because it has lots of details and data which is impossible for me to learn.

✓ I found geography a very difficult subject because it has lots of details and data which are impossible for me to learn.

The phrase 'very difficult subject' needs an article 'a' before 'very difficult subject'. Also, 'data' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'.

× I like to pursue my career in the subjects I like more.

✓ I like to pursue my career in the subjects I like more.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× I prefer those topics that are more practical and real life applications like economics.

✓ I prefer those topics that are more practical and have real-life applications, like economics.

The phrase 'real life applications' should be hyphenated as 'real-life applications' when used as an adjective. Also, 'are' should be followed by 'have' to correctly link 'topics' with 'applications'.

× No, I would not learn about the geography of other countries because I found it challenging subject and since childhood I'm struggling to learn about the maps and the details of geographical features of various countries.

✓ No, I would not learn about the geography of other countries because I found it a challenging subject and since childhood I've been struggling to learn about the maps and the details of geographical features of various countries.

The phrase 'challenging subject' needs an article 'a'. Also, 'I'm struggling' should be in present perfect continuous tense 'I've been struggling' to indicate an action continuing from the past to present.