Geography— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达不够清晰，语法和词汇使用有误，建议简洁明了地表达观点，并注意语法正确。

例: I have liked geography since I was in senior high school. I chose it as one of my subjects for the final exam because I find it very interesting.

提案: 回答内容不连贯，表达不清楚，建议用完整句子表达观点，并用具体例子支持。

例: Yes, I think geography is useful because it helps me understand different cultures and the reasons behind natural phenomena.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和重复，建议简洁明了地说明学习经历和感受。

例: Yes, I have studied geography since junior high school, and I find it a very useful subject that teaches me about the world.

提案: 表达不够流畅，语法错误较多，建议用简单句表达自己的兴趣和原因。

例: No, I don't want to be a geography teacher. I just enjoy learning about geography because it gives me a different perspective of the world.

提案: 回答不完整且表达不清，建议用完整句子说明学习其他国家地理的原因和兴趣。

例: Yes, I want to learn more about the geography of other countries because it will help me understand the differences between them and China.

× I like geography since I'm winter high Senior High School.

✓ I have liked geography since I was in winter senior high school.

这里使用现在时态不合适，因为表达的是从过去某个时间点开始持续到现在的状态，应该用现在完成时。

× I chose the geography at my subject of high exam and I think it's a amazing subject of the night.

✓ I chose geography as my subject for the high school exam and I think it's an amazing subject at night.

介词使用错误，应该用'as'表示选择，'for'表示考试的科目，'at night'表示时间。

× I think it's a amazing subject of the night.

✓ I think it's an amazing subject at night.

冠词'a'后面接以元音音素开头的单词时应使用'an'，且表达时间应使用'at night。

× Yes, I think geography gave me a umm unique view, unique side of the world and tell me why the what is that and the criminal or the ground. Why do that? I think I can.

✓ Yes, I think geography gives me a unique view, a unique side of the world, and tells me what that is and about the climate or the ground. Why is that? I think I can understand.

句子结构混乱，时态不一致，缺少连词，表达不清晰，需要调整语序和时态使句子通顺。

× Yes, uh, I learned, I have learned geography since I went to the UMM junior high school and I think it's a useful and uh, different subject of the line.

✓ Yes, I have learned geography since I went to UMM junior high school and I think it's a useful and different subject.

“learned”与“have learned”混用不当，应该用现在完成时表达从过去持续到现在的动作。

× I think he is a useful technique.

✓ I think it is a useful subject.

代词使用错误，'he'指人，'it'指物或事物，地理是学科，应使用'it'。

× No, I want, I think this is just my Internet interest and I think this is give me another view to see the world.

✓ No, I think this is just my personal interest and I think it gives me another view to see the world.

代词使用错误，'this'后面应接动词的第三人称单数形式，且'internet interest'表达不准确，应为'personal interest'。

× However, I didn't have the patient or the chance to dig the geography deeply.

✓ However, I didn't have the patience or the chance to study geography deeply.

'patient'是形容词，正确名词应为'patience'，且'geography'前不加定冠词。

× Yes, I think so. I think it's a very important thing if I want to go all over the world, I will see something different with China and I want to know why they are different, such as the China has not have a.

✓ Yes, I think so. I think it's very important. If I want to travel all over the world, I will see something different from China and I want to know why they are different, such as China does not have...

时态使用不当，条件句中应使用一般现在时，主句使用将来时。介词使用错误，'different with'应为'different from'。冠词使用错误，'the China'应为'China'。